Spiderman World of Heroes

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blackedge7

not much of an MJ fan. hope for spider-Gwen, black cat or Silk as the girlfriend. tired of saving or lying to a normal girl friend. seems like the new guy feels the same way I do.

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blackedge7

nice to see that while he is not letting people walk all over him like the old Peter he is still good at heart. I wonder if he will go with the old spider suit or go with a high tech one. the suits from the **4 Spider-Man game was sweet.

LV 14

ssdxd

Is this dropped please tell me this is not dropped it's really good. Also please dont make ie a Peter parker and mj I really dont like that match up. Marvel really should have let it be gween stacy or black cat. Anyway please come back to this also it's really good story please dont drop or come back

LV 3

NaphtaIi

This book is a great redo of the spiderman we have grown up with, this spiderman changes everything. It's that spider that if we were actually him, this is exactly what most people would do. The story is extremely realistic with most situations probably happening in people's dreams. Good job to the author.

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NOAHPOWELL233

Awesome. 🤔😁😁😁😁😁😁😃😁😁😃😃😻😀😄😄😄😄😃😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😃😃😃😄😄😀😄😄😄😄😃😃😄😄😃😁😣😣😣😣😣😁🙃😁🙃😁🙃🙃😄😻😆😄😆😃😁😁😃😄😄😀😆😃😃

LV 14

Tiktark

Overall i love this fanfic, it brings a realistic vibe to peter parker and has alot of potential. I hope you keep this great work up, and appreciate the time you take to show us some joy while reading in our boring lifes :D

LV 4

HaremQueen

I like the story a lot so far. If only the release rate was higher. Writing Quality: 3 stars There is not much problems with the writing quality. Not much grammatically errors, punctuations, etc. easy to read and understand without having to take a second look. Stability of Updating: 2 stars Like I said before, the story only has 9 chapters so far, and I love all of them. However, it’s been stuck on chapter 9 for awhile now with no updates. Story development: 4 stars The story is pretty much just starting and not many major changes have occurred yet, but I like the pace and way the author writes. Nothing overly complicated. Relatable. Character design: 3 stars Most of the character design and developments are from the original source from somewhere. Except for MJ being more of a B, and Tony being much younger. World background: 4 stars The surroundings, feelings, senses, and overall happenings are explained pretty well. The world itself is from original source so not much to say about that. I recommend this novel to everyone. I just hope the author doesn’t drop it. Sincerely, HaremQueen.

LV 6

ClayRayne

Good story, other than slow updates there isn't really anything to complain about. Hope to see the story continue unlike most which post 5-20 chapters then get dropped.

LV 14

nikest

This is a really good Spider-Man marvel fan fiction. The thing that really makes this Spider-Man fan fiction stand out is that its Spider-Man if he got reality check. The story is much more realistic.

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Juanda_365

I liked it, too bad there aren't more chapters

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R_Franco

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VitorEduardo

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Civilian_Shinobi

This was an unexpectedly good read. I’m usually not into the stories that try to remake hero’s into a supposedly better model. It never pans out, the characters come out flat and their struggles turn almost one dimensional. That it’s the case for this story. I hope to see the more of this Peter soon. Him trying to figure out his new life as both a hero and a person has held my attention and I’m beginning to respect him as person and he hasn’t even made a hero debut!

LV 14

Anish_Kumar_6194

Overall story is nice.But please introduce black cat or Gwen Stacy instead of MJ. And also please update fasttttttttt. 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

LV 5

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

I like the concept. However this is a case of a writer not matching the IQ of his MC or an education related to the Mcs actions to make his decisions seem even remotely interesting. One such thing is business. Parker starts up and sells a new product, yet takes the first ****ty offer his potential buyer makes. Just this one thing breaks the entire story regarding the character. Spiderman has always been somewhat tricky because his actions don't match his IQ but that could have been explained by his upbringing and how warped his uncles death made him. This? This is the transmigration of a guy into spidy and has no such excuses. That's why he becomes a start-up... Its just that he then suddenly makes decisions an uninformed 10 year old makes... I'm starting up in something irl. I'm not smart but even I first immersed myself in how to go about things. That this si spidy doesn't even have a look at the ins and outs is really, REALLY story breaking.

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johh_khihj

I love this there is some MJ bashing and its pretty good story and I hope there are more chapter and mc is kinda stupid but not that stupid but is good story.

LV 12

silkjo

Character development is good. Great use of knowledge. I also like that the character isn't a push over. I look forward to his first acts as a superhero. And i look forward to him finding a girl friend in school

LV 14

JimmyBlah

I really appreciate the depth of thought put into the character’s motives and responses along with the other background character’s ‘being’ such as the different tony etc.

LV 13

Servant_Ambrosius

this is a good story the only reason the rating isn't higher is because of the stability of updates. BTW is this dropped or not cause it's been 3 months since the last update

LV 4

matheus_1507

I really enjoy this story. Please post more chapters. I, and others, want more. Please continue. I want more moar moooaaarrr mmmmoooooooaaaaaarrrrr.