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After fight with sinister six. Peter got poisoned and lose his life. At same time person from another world died and his soul take over body of peter.
watch journey of different peter parker with different personality become strongest hero in whole multiverse with system by his side.
I don't own any character used in this story except some oc I might use. I don't own marvel, dc, and any friction i use in this story.
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look the idea is great ☺️👍, but your grammar SUCKS 😅 fix the grammar and then IT will be LEGENDARY.
Bro me too as a marvel fan-fic writer I can say that this story is super nice to continue to update it
Garbage FF and idiot author. The author decided to give Peter a tragic backstory in which everyone close to him betrayed, cheated, or used him. Peter, before going against six villains, asked for help but they all ignored him. What happened afterwards? He died and then the MC takes over the body. You would think that this SI would be smart but that’s not the case at all with this MC. He has already forgiven most of the people that pretty much gave him the middle finger before Peter’s death. Why? Idk, the author is stupid. I can already tell that he’ll eventually end up forgiving everyone while adding every female, including the ones who he had a bad relationship with, to his harem.
I'll keep it simple. Way too much garbage cluttered in there. CIAO........................................................................................
This a very cool idea please keep it up and try to work on your grammar a bit more otherwise this amazing
Absolutely abomination, mtl is more comprehensible than this. At least in mtl they don’t use this script style garbage. First paragraph of chapter one will drain your brain cells. Needs heavy editing. At least read it out loud to yourself or run it through a grammar checker before posting.
okay so far I'm interested in this story. spiderman was is my favorite marvel hero and I like the amazons that was added in here. Can't wait to see what happens when Peter and Diane go back to civilization it's going to be great. author keep up the great work and please don't drop this please keep it going.
Till chapter 33 it was good. Grammar was at times terrible to read but from the story development is was all cool. Before the story even begins he had like 10 girlfriends one at a time who all cheated on him. With different men from the groups and only 3 or 4 he hates the rest he somehow forgives and joins the avenger in later chapters. Even though they betrayed his trust more then one time. After chapter 34 where he forgives them and says they need to earn his trust again i dropped the story because i cant find myself agreeing with that decision. I hope the review is as neutral as possible even if most of it is negative over the story. I wish all others a good reading experience and the author fun and motivation to write more
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Author-san,everything is good but If you can then please write the scenes more realistically,everything is "all in or none" . I mean every character is so much 2d and lines cringe. You grammer is good. Thank you for your hardwork.
great story, grammar is pretty weak hope you continue to improve as write more. Hopefully you'll write more good luck 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I’m really enjoying this story it has real potential but I think you need to get someone to help with grammar with that it will be a great story.
I knew it I have read this before and I found it I read this in Wattpad from Natsu433 so either you copied and pasted the whole story without changing anything not grammar or spelling or you are just the same author either way I didn’t enjoy reading it back then and nothing has changed.
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keep up the great work and dont drop the story, the story is good and its not rushed just fix the grammar a a bit and you are golden
i like this story very much, but the author is not updating it anymore. I hope the author will continue writing it.
Why do people use the script style to write a NOVEL? I came looking to read a novel not a f**king theater script. I:- This is dumb I:- You can be more creative and this style is trash