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Sovereign of Blood
4.16 (125 audimat)
Synopsis
A Glib, Charming, Deceitful, Cunning & Manipulative Vampire with a Grandiose Sense of Self-Worth creates a River of Blood to the Summit of a Dangerous World filled with Magic and Wonders!
CAUTION - R-18 Descriptive Scenes
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The story started great. It then became horribly dull and stupid. I believe the best part was the first town. Everything after that is rushed garbage. Many parts feel like you missed a chapter. I found myself checking if I had missed a chapter at some point because author jumped to a course of events that had no build up whatsoever, and no logical reasoning behind them. I almost dropped it at that point, but then I thought...hey, he's just a beginner and this is an original story. He should improve the more he writes, right? This is only going to get better, right? Wrong! It only gets worse... The worst part is that Tarun *SPOILER ALERT* gets raped by an army of demons..and I don't mean raped like with punches and attacks...I mean sexually gangbanged...I'm disgusted by this author. Horrible story...
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This is a very refreshing 'Evil Protagonist' story as it steps away from the overused clichés of the Xuanhuan and xianxia genre. Although it has a reincarnation and system attribute to it, The author very cleverly twists the plot again and again and keeps you excited for what's coming next. Looking Forward for the next chapter!
The protagonist does things for no reason, very childish and not the mindset that one would expect from someone of his origin. Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler.
It's very poorly written, childish, lacks sense, and a good flow. I can't get past that and have dropped it. I also have trouble understanding the many 5 star reviews. I would get it if it was well written and just not my cup of tea but with this...yea.
The story started out pretty decent for an original. The start was ok but really there is no description of character appearance and almost to none world building (except for some at the beginning). The pace is fast... "way over the top" fast which leads to a plot that feels like you (but in fact it's the author) unintentionally skipped a chapter (or for that matter an entire arc of character development). By chapter 30 I can guarantee you that you will know what I am talking about. For those who read stories with an A.I./Bio-Chip will encounter a "System" which is a fresh take on the monotone notifications, it calls the MC a weakling and stuff, but it is way to OP scanning and hacking almost all peoples magic and artifacts before the MC has justifiable strength. Yes it's a first(?🤔) for the author but in no way should this be an excuse for this "story" (a story should really be a logical connection of events).
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It's nice seeing another evil novel here. The characters and world look nice. The only thing bothering me is the grammar. But besides that it is a nice read. I will wait for more chapters to decide on it.
An action-packed, brilliantly gruesome tale of an immensely fascinating protagonist, or if it's okay to call him that! Love the graphic scenes. Love the characters. Love the deep and layered type of the storysetting. A must read. Kudos to the author. 😈😍
Pretty good story at the beginning,but then it felt really rushed.......................really rushed...................really rushed.......
Good concept with a string beggining. At some point though the strory starts to lose any sense of coherence, I repeatedly felt I had missed something but it turns out the author just left things out. Had great potential just seems like it wasn't thought out properly
I believe this story is great and the characters are interesting. I don't want to be rude but the only problem with this is the author. There are only so many fire stones to go around. I enjoy the authors that are more humble and enjoy getting Stones then, those that begging for more.
I liked the story, is original and the protagonist is well developed. Is a bit rushed some times and some facts need clarification but as a whole this story is good.
Well, this novel is one of the first origin novels that i had started to read and i must say that the Author is truly hardworking and has a stable update rate that is welly good for a new writer. other than this his work's quality is also slowly improving and maturing along the time so that in this last chapter we see less and less spelling problems and grammar mistakes. also his writing style is also improving and we see much lesser the rash descriptions and jumping here and there rashly without explanations. All of this is show that our author is doing his best but there is one main problem that Author hadn't try to solve it and that is the storyline. this novel's story line is a huge mess and empty nothing MC not only is an idiot that himself thinks he's smart but to this point of story except the first chapter that we now he died and reincarnated for Dracula we didn't know anything else why he's going to tournaments while he crushed them and why again and again and thousand of problem that there is while the story don't have a purpose and even Author himself don't know what is his goal Storyline and characters are terrible and Author seriously must sit and thinks for a plan and storyline and purpose for his novel Just updating never was something good and never is I thinks this Novel's Ranking already wonderful for this terrible storyline and character Design and certainly in the future the rank of novel will be decreasing with coming of good other novel
Sir u r doing good work, but plz give us chapters quick, story is good, Mc growth also good, but chapter is to short, for example in chapter around one & two things & chapters close, sorry to say but what I mean chapter is to short I feel, sir u r a good writer, u have more capabilities than that sir. So best of luck.
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Okay I don’t really like writing reviews because they are a bit tedious but for this story it was worth it. Finally there is a story that reflects vampires as they really are bloody and vicious. Another thing is that blood control is not a side class anymore (like in other story’s).
This has just become one of my favourite books, original or not, AND I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!! The MC is smart and does not lose his **** when a girl smiles at him. There is no BS about killing one dude who then calls his dad who then calls HIS dad who then calls their FUCKING ANCESTOR into it all. He may be a little too OP but it fits the story and the MC's actions truly fit the description of a vampire and not just some wanna-be MC that the author bullshits new things about him every time. NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!!!
This story, i have no words how much i like it. All i can say is.. clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap.
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So far this novel has given me a lot of excitement, the current flow, development, and character is amazing (in a condition that i have to pretend that i dont have any knowledge about the bloodline). I know it is still to early to say that this novel will become another epic novel, as many geniuses fall before they reach the apex’s. But i have a certain feeling that around chapter 300 and so on will be your first bottlenecks.
Boiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii this is really well written! Sometimes I feel bad about the merciless massacres, but... I still love it for this novel and the story would not be the same without it
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Good so far. I like the way in which you are progressing. Although, the genre and setting seems a bit cliche at first. But, author is taking a unique approach with his mc which changes scenario alot. Let's see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
Hello Fellow Daoists! How are you? I just wrote this Novel on a whim but I won't be going on any hiatus before completing it..Stick around if you like the novel and you can also drop by later to check if you didn't like it now. I am always grateful for all the criticisms and suggestions that you guys might have!