Hi. Author here.
I'm gonna do my best to edit the first few chapters in the next few days. It won't be a big change, but I'm just gonna structure stuff a little bit better, more proofreading and stuff like that.
The story will still be like that. Dumb, annoying, random, mostly episodic, yet will follow through a story arc, and end goal.
It might not seem like it, but hey, if you stick around, it's either you've turned off your brain, or you're fine with the humor.
Thanks guys.