Synopsis
a story about a hafe ogre with a system This will be dark book no stops also this is my first book and i will love to hear any ideas fun stuff even if you think its trash tell me the system is based on re.monster / lvl system plus evolution iv created a map and everything i have an idea where to go with this the planet elfin a untamed giant land masses empires , kingdoms the works it starts in the cold wind forest in the united states of Estoria thats locked in a massive war withe the goldcoast empire
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.......................................................................................................................................................... shameless 5star
For the first chapter it was okay and it's your first book I'd say 4 stars I like the system it's not just a Lil up scum fest but has Lil spice