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Sloth-kun is Bored
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What would you do if a pink-haired loli with demon horns knocked on your door one day and told you she was going to isekai you because she was bored? Not to worry she is going to give you perks to make sure you survive. You just have to choose certain "entertainment points" to keep her entertained. Made your decisions? No regrets? Then let the fun begin!
-based on the cyoa Overpowered Isekai by Tokhaar Gol
-This is my first published work so please bear with me. Constructive criticism, advice, and comments are always welcomed, but trolls can go the way of the thots. Please enjoy.
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Obligatory, shameless author, first review. A slow-burn story that focuses on a college student that doesn't see the point in trying anymore. Until he is visited by a demon a given the chance of a lifetime, to be isekaied into a new world and become the protagonist of his own story. The story starts slow as he learns how to survive and thrive in this new world and regain his motivation to strive for the top. However, these slower moments are dotted with hints towards his epic future and interesting past that should keep readers interested. The story also has some unnecessary parts as I am trying out some new stuff and need reader feedback on how it works. In the end, this story is a test run of my writing capabilities to find was readers do and do not enjoy and try out different styles before I publish the multi-work project that I am currently working on. Though this story will tie into that larger world after we get far enough in it, as I am sure future readers will be able to tell from chapter 1. I hope everyone enjoys my work and continues to read this and my future projects.
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Interesting start. Not sure how I feel about a story where I know so many people are going to betray the MC, but lets see where this goes. I'll just go ahead and give five stars all around for potential.