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~ The Story Progressive is Slow. ~ There were some misspelled words such as Character Names, Cultivation Stages, Etc. ~ The Author has a Great Naming Sense! I bet the MC won't name his pet later(if he ever got any in the future) with Little White or something. ~ A Good Storytelling !! ~ Vivid Descriptions !! ~ The Character Portrayal was also nice !! ~ Great Romance !!! ~ Single FL !!!! Woooooooooo!!!!! Overall This is A Gem!! With a good Potential and Premise!! I hope the Author remains consistent and don't break our little heart.
10/10 The choice of words, description, characters, system, and features are well written. You had me worrying for the MC as he took risks hahaha.
The first chapter was hooking, it was interesting, the pacing was smooth, transitions felt natural, though their might be a little bit of confusion of I and He at the beginning nothing much as it can just be glossed over. I'll continue reading. The story and premise aren't that all new but the way it is written is interesting. Keep it up!
Great piece of work done, the writing is sublime and the story is very good. Keep going author, don't know why you don't have more views though
The start is already looking promising. I have only read four chapters but the writing is really sublime and hooks you in. Though I do have to say that it felt a bit crowded. perhaps break into small paragraphs? Overall a great reading experience
I've reached the latest chapter, and the book's vivid descriptions made me feel like I was right there. The first chapter had me completely hooked. One suggestion I have is to consider shorter paragraphs – at times, lengthy ones can be a bit daunting and affect my motivation. Overall, it’s a fantastic read!
Really enjoyed reading the first portion of this book and am excited to see how it grows in the future. Grammar wise there seem to be minor problems but nothing major and it’s an enjoyable read so most people won’t even notice The updates are good so far but need more chapters overall. Character development and descriptions are really well down and the characters feel like real humans rather than random robots pushing the plot. All in all it’s a great book with lots of promise and look forward to see what this Author can create.
Honestly confused on how this doesn't have more views. The writing is unbelivably descriptive that it makes it feel like you're the one experiencing what Liam is experiencing. Would rate this higher, but I've only read 2 chapters. But I am hooked! Will be reading more whenever I get the chance!
i really love this novel i dont really like this kind of novels i more likely to read a medivel settings novel but the storytelling kept me engaged and i like the MC one of the best MC i seen so far in novels
Nice and intrigued played of words.Well detail explained, intriguing twist and can hook the player in just 1 chapter.Try this novel, you will know a diamond in the rough coal mine.I'm rooting for your novel.
Every para focuses on vivid description making this piece work alive on its own, written really well but could go 5 star if swift actions are explained more clearly Either way nice read (I intended to read only ch1 but ended up reading more😉)
The story is overall very good it has great potential and background, however I must point out that you didnt give us a description of Liam
Very beautifully written every words force you to visualize the secene, very well done bro keep it up, only the first chapter hooked me up [img=strong]
The words,the vivid description and my the suspense,I might as well have been there!Amazing Work
Although I was confused at the occasional pov change at the first, I think the story has potential, the writing style, plot, and settings are not bad, anyway keep it up
Firstly, I love the cover of the book and the slogan. "Live Fully, No Regret" You can already tell that the book is going to be filled with some satisfying elements. Update stability is great, please keep it up Author. Writing style is elegant, yet easy to understand. 5 stars from me :)
Love it, The vocabulary selection, vivid descriptions, character portrayals, system design, and features are all crafted impeccably. Your storytelling truly drew me in!
Author here. If you have any questions, post them below, and I will answer them if it's not a spoiler. Some questions asked before: Is this novel harem? No Is MC OP? No. MC needs to use his head often. How is the MC? Mc has a bad past, where he is betrayed not just by his friends, and relatives, but also by society. He is the type that can burn the whole town to save his own loved one.