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Chapitre 28: New Arrival

I can't wait to try out this new magic. I'm practically jumping with joy, after all this magic sounds pretty fancy, I don't think I could obtain them under normal circumstances. Well, I can test them out later, I guess I should start heading back now. I've got proof that I killed nine undead so that should be... 36 silver, nice.

I had left the ruins, and when the town came into view I noticed there was large traffic going into it. Were these the adventurers I heard about? If I pick up the pace maybe I can check out their stats before they start their job. I did just that and started jogging back to the town. Along the way, I decided to try out my [Blood Magic]

So what, do I just imagine what I want it to form and use the magic? Let's try a knife.

[Blood Magic]

"Ow, ow, ow, this really hurts"

The blood from my body started pooling near my right hand, and after a few red swirls a crude-looking kitchen knife formed in my hand. It's probably not sanitary to make food with, but it looks cool. I hit a nearby tree with it, and after about four strong hits the knife broke. I continued walking back to town. It's definitely not perfect; it used a lot of blood, hurt a lot, had imperfections all over it, and broke in just a few hits, but if I can make someone else bleed then this should be really useful. I wonder how much blood is needed to make something like a greatsword or battleaxe. Oh, I'm at the town entrance.

I gave my card to the guard at the gate and headed in. As soon as I entered there was a swarm of people surrounding what looked like four people in very nice equipment. At the center was a blond and Caucasian man wearing a set of very shiny dark blue armor; is that mithril? It looks like they're famous; are all high-ranking adventurers this well-liked and praised? Maybe I should focus on being a better adventurer.

After listening to the crowd, I came to the conclusion that their group name was "athanasía," whatever that means and their leader was the blond guy in blue armor whose name was Alexander Wesley

[Inspect]

[Name: Alexander Kafedril]

Species: Human

Level: 75

Class: Swordsman

HP: 8973

MP: 472

Attributes:

Strength: 46

Vitality: 67

Intelligence: 5

Agility: 19

Defense: 87

Holy fuck who are these guys? Is everyone in their group this strong? Let's try someone else in their group.

[Inspect]

[Name: George Urasiel]

Species: Human

Level: 57

Class: Scout

HP: 1879

MP: 249

Attributes:

Strength: 24

Vitality: 19

Intelligence: 3

Agility: 38

Defense: 20

Not as impressive as the other guy, maybe I just overestimated them a bit.

George looked in my direction before locking his sight on me. I ducked behind the crowd as soon as I noticed, but it's probably best to assume he saw me. Was it because I used Inspect on him? Did he notice because he's a scout? Was it perhaps due to a skill? Well, whatever it was I should probably stay out of their way for a bit. Who knows, maybe he didn't get a good look at me.

I snuck away and made my way back to the Adventurers Guild where I showed proof of my completion of the task; in turn, I was given 24 silver coins. It was getting dark out, I guess I should find a place to stay for the night.

I ended up finding a small and cheap place near the guild, and for the cost of 5 silver coins a night, I got a room, breakfast, and dinner. A decent price if I do say so myself. I want to try and get some more money soon, after all, if I'm going to be an adventurer I should probably look the part. My clothes now make me look like a farmer.

*

I opened the window of my room and looked outside. The night sky was so clear tonight; It was beautiful. I just stared at the sky. After some more time passed, I closed the window and went to bed.

*

I woke up to screams and shouts; I quickly rushed and opened my window. It was still nighttime, but a large wall of flames illuminated the sky and surrounded a portion of the city. I looked around and believe I found the culprit. A single creature floated in the sky above all the chaos, it was that guy in the book I set free. What was his name? Wait, did I not ask for his name?

[Inspect]

[BLOCKED]

A sense of pain rushed through my head, and when I saw him again he was looking at me. His attention was quickly taken away from me as a large spell was flung toward him from below. A flash of blue covered the fire and extinguished it.

Shit, do I run from the city or fight? What to do, what to do... Oh god dammit. I put my shoes on and rushed out of the inn. I might as well try and help, I mean I can always escape if things go wrong, plus I feel partially responsible.


L’AVIS DES CRÉATEURS
CarsonODST CarsonODST

I started writing this when I was in high school just for fun, and while I love the ideas and story I had come up with for it, I don't like how it is written and feel like a HUGE overhaul is needed if I want the novel to read how I envisioned it. Sadly I don't have the time to go back and rewrite nearly 25k words worth of story while changing things along the way to be more interesting. I just don't have the free time to do this when I could be writing another story or doing something else. I'm sorry, but this series will be on indefinite hold.

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