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rwby of ragnarok
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Synopsis
a soul was given what most people want to happen to them,an isekai adventure,how it happened?
godly kidnapping,yeah you heard me he was about to die to a death god over ice cream so his elder brother brought him to his realm and was given a second chance in the world of remnant,and the women of the world were…thirsty to say the least.
but he wasn’t going there with only the clothes on his back.
now armed with the record of ragnarok quest template system,he will soon become a legend not only in the world of remnant but through the multiverse.
(disclaimer: I’m not sure if I’m going to be sending him through the multiverse,but maybe he’ll go to other worlds if he defeats Salem and fixes other worldly problems)
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- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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I’m optimistic with the story so far, I like a lot of what I’ve seen, and the future is pretty open with a lot of potential. It is however, not perfect. I think Adam and Eve accepted him as their new son a little too quickly without much confusion. I am worried about the personalities of a lot of the characters, especially Ruby, with the gender role changes. The reason so many people like the girls in RWBY isn’t just because they are bueatiful, but because of their personalities, and I’m very worried those are going to change, Ruby we have already seen be less innocent, which is a big part of her character. I also do not like how open the MC was with Ozpin. Ozpin is willing to use those around him, especially children, to fight in his never ending war, sending them off to certain death. He manipulates others and only tells them what he wants them to know, so to willingly give him all of this info seemed like a really dumb idea. The only way I can see this not being a problem is if you change the character of Ozpin to a better person, but then he’s a much different character. This might seem like a little thing to rant so much about but it’s honestly a big sticking point for me, it along with a few other small factors, almost made me drop the story.
A good story, but a bit confusing with the first chapter rewrite but if you disregard it it is good.