Synopsis
Alteria's future veered far away from its intended path. It was once known as Earth until a shocking phenomenon took it by storm.
An evolution occurred, heralding in a new era―an age of superhumans―the Awakeneds.
However, the evolution came at a severe price.
While Mana filled the planet's domain, a shocking obelisk rose in the center of the world. Afterward, the tower pulled countless humans into a preliminary event.
The result―Guardians. Alarmingly powerful beings with the ability to defend their world against the looming threat of terrifying enemies.
Unfortunately, the summons affected Lucian Salvatore drastically, leading to his journey to find out the truth.
His story to the path of becoming the Limitless One begins...
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Écrire un avisThis is one of the best novels ive read that focus on climbing a tower, this book has great potential and can definitely reach the top if you put enough effort, please do not drop this🙏
A simple breakdown about this story for any of those who ask the same questions repeatedly. This is a modern-futuristic weak to strong story where the beginning is more of a prelude—a set up for what's to come. With that being said, the story picks up around Chapter 36. Yes, there will be romance, tons of action, good and bad decisions. From something insignificant the MC will have to grow into someone with power. If you're unable to get past a period of weakness, then this novel isn't for you. Other than that, thank you for reading/supporting the novel.
Let’s go according to order, shall we? Writing Quality:- Excellent. The words flow smoothly and there are little grammatical mistakes. The author has real flair with actual substance not just simply filling word count and I can assure you that the style of writing is really immersive. Updating Stability:- This author does sometimes have irregular days where he doesn’t update but I don’t see the author improving it in anyway and I’m not really bothered by it. Story Development:- As usual with weak-to-strong stories, the beginning may seem slow but once you get into the action, it’s a done deal being well explained and never stale. I really love the smoothness of the pace as it seems to have been even more polished than his previous works. Character Design:- As written in the author’s review, the character’s decisions seem well thought out and relatable with some having a few screws loose. The MC is likeable and seems like a average guy. Although I can’t really go into detail as a lot of side character backgrounds aren’t revealed as of yet, I trust the author’s skills. World Background:- My favorite thing about this author is his intricate power system. That’s not to say it hasn’t been used before, it’s just that the author does it well. It’s woven delicately and he usually uses the debuff and buff system[One where one ability supplements another’s shortcomings]. The world background has not had much exposition as it dives into the Tower fast but I have high expectations. Summary:- The author does have his faults with irregular updates and imo slowing down the power upgrades by detailing the power system by too much. But, at the end of the day, this whole review is my opinion and I really like this book.
So far so good, I like the execution of the novel. The MC is a likeable act according to reason. I like how it did not follow the usual cliche that I was expecting when he met with the colleague in the tutorial, it seems that we of them have a good view toward him even if the MC thought otherwise. I hope his brothers will not be neglected in terms of importance and development.
I personally like this book and some of the characters, I feel as though the story is fairly well paces and many of the characters are well made even if I don't like some of them but I can recognize why they act the way they do, there's already been well paced and understandable character growth on the part of the mc, however I'm a little worried about the upload stability since it's been three days since the last chapter and it's normally 1 a day, I can understand a few days off but I'm worried something might have happened to the author
This one of those novels that are very smooth reading. The story flows and is doesn ’t have derogtory sweeping statements. The MC has growth and reasons for his actions that make him very likable. The only problem so far is that there has been no new updates for months.
While I'd like to give it 4 stars, unfortunately, I can't do things like 4.5 or 3.5. So things that are a bit above 4 stars are averaged down to just 4, and things that are only a little bit below 4 are stuck all the way down at 3. Writing Quality: The actual writing only has minor grammatical errors and very few mistakes, overall sitting at a much higher standard than what is typically found on the website. Though that's not to say it doesn't have an excessive amount of repetitive word choices, strange sentence construction, and unnatural dialogue. Things that simply don't make much sense are often stated as well. The author also tends to over-use exposition, especially through character dialogue that has no sensible context for being said. The author tends to over-repeat details, such as how strong or rare guardians are, through the use of characters that are all already completely aware of this, though I will more than admit my own work has this flaw as well. I will note they have exceptional use of unique wording. Many people still like the writing, so don't let my review deter you. Stability of Updates: Pretty good, the fact that someone asked if the author was okay in a review due to a mere 3-day gap in releases should tell you a lot. Story Development: Meh, it develops as expected, there are plenty of tired cliches and obvious set-ups/outcomes. It's not bad, I want to make that clear, just nothing too special. Enough background information is explained (if not overly, and forcibly, explained at times) to make most of the writing choices seem logical. The pacing is fairly good as well, taking time to set up characters and setting before diving into the meat of the story. Character Design: Pretty good, the amount of random expository dumps characters give in almost completely unrelated sentences can throw off their believability, and a lot of their dialogue is clunky or weirdly constructed. A lot of their motivations and decisions are explained well enough to make sense, and they don't often behave in unbelievable or overly stupid ways for the sake of the plot. The main thing making them feel like characters rather than people, is the sheer amount of seemingly forced, almost completely unnecessary exposition the author often has them spout through dialogue rather than utilizing a narrative third-person perspective. There are also a lot of 'fake smart' moments in this book, where characters (typically the protagonist) suddenly gain insight into something with no actual setup that would even remotely lead them to the conclusion they're portrayed as smart for reaching. For example; The characters are given time to look through a shop-like system in their menu and buy items before heading into the tutorial, and the MC somehow determines that they're doing this to test how they handle pressure, off of absolutely nothing but the fact they were allowed to buy items before heading into combat, and this is portrayed as a moment of the main character being extremely deductive and intelligent. It comes off as insincere. World Background: Again, my biggest issue here is that the author occasionally over-does the exposition. The world is fleshed out as much as it needs to be for the story and is handled fairly believably. Though a few aspects come off as illogical, such as the story noting 'governing' alongside technology, and etc improving due to people entering monoliths, when there really isn't any logical way this would happen, unless the monoliths are dropping books on governance from superior alien civilizations or the like. Overall worth a read, I know most people here don't have very stringent standards for writing quality, and this is certainly an above-average novel on the sight. So go nuts!
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Spoiler de révélationDo not let the overall rating which is low fool you this would have had 5* across the board but I have come to realise this book will never be finished... which has resulted in the low rating 😭 Part of me wishes I had not started this book... if it was continued under another title please let me know 🙏
It's turning out to be something great. I really like the setup of the whole world and the characters also seem great and sophisticated. Keep it up Author-san....😎
5/writing quality is great for the standerds of this site 3/ idk stability of updates 4/ good story development so far 4/ all characters are bearable and somewhat reasonable so far 5/ world background is somewhat unique and good Good book but the author is absolute TRASH at titles like why not name it "Obelisk" or "The Great Monolith" instead of a cheesy title, quite literally describing the main character. Also never put the word system in ur titles it sounds lazy and of poor quality.
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Fantastic. That is what came to my mind when I finished binge reading all of this book’s chapters. Lately I’ve been reading original stories because of the translated novels here not meeting any of my standards. And here I found a true gem with this book. The plot is fleshed out nicely and the characters have a smooth growth. The Mc’s personality is level headed and his action reasonable. There is no BS of him not having a backbone - he stands up for himself, but not in the arrogant/stupid type way. It’s also really satisfying to see how he deals with his enemies (He doesn’t let them push him around and refutes with facts and logic). Even though it took a bit of time for the limitless cheat to actually appear chapterwise (I wont say what it is), it wasnt too long and plot flowed nicely. All in all great job author with what youve accomplished so far and good luck!