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Guy dies, gets isekaied in the Harry potter world and realises he is a black.Watch as he goes through life in this new world.
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We Will see how the Story unfolds🐍🦁🐻🐦💜💙💚💛♥️❤️💜💙💚💛♥️❤️💜💙💚💛♥️❤️💜💙💚💛♥️❤️💜💙💚💛♥️❤️💜💙💚💛♥️❤️💜💙💚💛♥️❤️💜💙💚💛♥️❤️💜💙💚💛♥️❤️💜💙💚💛♥️❤️💜💙
too early to review but still doing it anyway. I like the way the MC acts so far. He is cautious and prepares for what is to come. though it doesnt make sense how magic works the same as nen and chakra, still it is a very unique take into it. hopefully this fanfic does well in the future 🙂
intetesting 🦇🐈🐶🐺🐀🦌🦉🖤💜💙💚💛🧡❤️ . 🦇💚🤍 🐈❤️💛 🐶❤️💛🐺❤️💛🦌❤️💛 . 💙🧡 💚🤍 💛🖤 ❤️💛intetesting 🦇🐈🐶🐺🐀🦌🦉🖤💜💙💚💛🧡❤️ . 🦇💚🤍 🐈❤️💛 🐶❤️💛🐺❤️💛🦌❤️💛 . 💙🧡 💚🤍 💛🖤 ❤️💛intetesting 🦇🐈🐶🐺🐀🦌🦉🖤💜💙💚💛🧡❤️ . 🦇💚🤍 🐈❤️💛 🐶❤️💛🐺❤️💛🦌❤️💛 . 💙🧡 💚🤍 💛🖤 ❤️💛
The concept sounds good, but the execution is poorly done. Using reference from another world would be fine, if it had any actual thought put into it into HOW it works. This novel uses the world of Naruto as a reference point, which isn't the thing I find poorly done. What I don't like is that the author is saying that because it works in one world, it would definitely work in another the same way - in this case Harry Potter. The MC used Shadow clone jutsu and it just worked; no intricacy, no thought, just "I will try, it worked, yay." I get it, this is a a world of magic, but this is just ridiculous. Not to forget that he uses the chakra exercises (tree climbing and leaf sticking etc) as a way to improve upon his magic control along with the amount he has. If this was done using the excuse of "I will climb a tree/wall while continuously casting the sticky charm, wandlessly" then I would be perfectly fine with it, at least the author is using a possible in-world thing as an excuse, but suddenly pulling the shadow clone jutsu working exactly like the original is just annoying. This is it, for now; I might delete this later, if I feel like it.
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unfortunately it's not good. clearly the author has stolen from ideas from other novels that I have read before and put some minor twist by adding naruto jutsus by the use of magic...there are quite a bit of grammatical issues and sentence structure issues that make the entire point of reading a chore...chapters as well are short with barely stuff moving forward...I personally am a huge fan of hp fanfics but even I wouldn't recommend reading this mess well atleast until the author gets a really good editor to fix this broken mess...then what else....oh yea character interactions are abysmal as well...guess that's it I think
I finished chapter one, and have decided it is not for me......Why you ask?....Simple the MC is an emotionless robot, and when he transmigrates he has ALL the things he needs and stars align and skill with no reason what so ever....he literately saw two wizard's duel them selves with killing curses when he arrived and got free loot for all his school needs...wow.
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Really liking it, keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i think it alright👍👍👍👍👍👍and it has it own flaws👎👎👎 but it good👍👍👍👍keep writing author-san 😁😁😁and i support you💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪
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I mean apparently creating Magic and using it is easy cause mc is already creating Shadow Clones and all that shaz like really? lol thats ridiculous
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good so far character looks promising and isn't being stupid about his actions. made sure he has enough power before doing inheritance test which is good as many do it straight away without proper power
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Giving myself 5 stars because I can _________________________________________________________________________________________________________
sorry for low rating, but this isnt your story and neither do you have a link to the original. not only that but you didnt post all the existing chapters