/ Book&Literature / Reverend Insanity: Experiment N.001[dropped]
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Two men are standing in a windowless office dimly lit by a small lamp on the ceiling.
"Damn it! Damn it! Damn it!"
"That was the last group we had!"
"They were supposed to be top-of-the-line superhumans. Demons in human skin!"
"How does this make any sense!"
~ Scientist Port Till(the head scientist of 'Interdimensional Travel')
"If I don't produce results soon! then I'm going to be 'fired'!" ~ In this business 'fired' was code for getting wiped from history and his head was starting to develop bold spots.
"U-um Sir. If I may interject." ~ Sim Art his Assistant spoke up.
"What!" ~ One could hear the clear rage in Port's voice.
The Assistant swallowed and loosened his necktie ~ "Technically that wasn't our last group..."
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A lot of plot armor... Apart from the MC, it seems that the IQ of all the characters has gone down... A desecration of Reverend Insanity... #TeamReverendInsanity
I am giving you 5 stars for trying to write a RI fanfic hope the protagonist doesn't take a useless path like fire water luck or wisdom. Please make his ascension path heaven path or at least human path. Ps. go to the crazed demon cave and steal the primordial domain before the fate war I don't think limitless would mind considering he is millions of years 😂😂😂
A decent fanfic I guess the only thing I don’t like about the story’s are the multiple main characters that I have to keep up with even though I only want to know what N.001 is doing… Idk just a warning for people like me who are to lazy to keep up with main chars🤷🏾♂️😅
DIAMOND! This is a diamond. Why is there so liitle views? This deserve to be in top charts.
Algo que me encanta de RI, es su sistema de cultivo, es jodidamente frustrante conseguir poder, pero así sea poquito se nota la diferencia entre lo mortal e inmortal, más sin embargo me parece muy ridículo que un mortal mate a Gu Master Rango 2 o 3, si los mato con la mirada... ¿que sentido tienen los gusanos? En pocas palabras muy OverPower el MC, lo cual hace la trama aburrida...
I love that you tried writing a reverend insanity fanfic but there are so many things wrong with this novel like the plot is too rushed, the mc is too overpowered, grammer errors, etc. Only reason I am not giving this a lower rating is because this is your first book and if you really wanna be a professional writer you have to learn from your mistakes and only then can you write a great evil mc fic or novel.