Synopsis
Riz is a fresh graduate who has been job hunting for a year. In terms of talent, he has no talent. Always a mediocre type of person. The only good point he has is that he is a hardworking person. After so many failed interviews, he starts to get dispirited. However, as he does not so easily give in to that feeling, he resolves to try his luck in the last interview he has.
Indeed, it is his last interview. An accident occurs on his way there.
When he opens his eyes, he is in the middle of the forest, tattered clothes with blood on it.
"Th-this...", Riz was shocked as he found his body smaller than it should be.
It didn't take him too much time to understand everything that happened. He becomes the youngest son of a count.
Finding himself in the backward world, he who has no ambition previously is in a dilemma. At first, he just wants to live quietly and enjoy the richness and privilege as a noble. But then circumstances push him in a different direction.
One event led to another, now he finds himself at the top of power.
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Écrire un avisI'm curious that there's little amount of people reading this masterpiece, it's a good kingdom building also has a decent MC to be hooked at.
The Kingdom Building series presents a captivating storyline, but there are certain aspects that require further clarification and development. Allow me to address your concerns regarding the plot: Arquebus: The lack of explanation regarding barrel production and the manual manufacturing of arquebuses raises questions about the feasibility and efficiency of such processes without advanced machinery or smelting techniques. Cannons: The absence of a comprehensive explanation regarding the creation of cannons, especially cast iron cannons, leaves uncertainty about the availability of necessary resources, such as coal, for their construction. Gunpowder: The origin of saltpeter, a vital component of gunpowder, is not adequately addressed in the narrative. It is essential to establish a believable source of saltpeter and sulfur for sustained large-scale ammunition production. Steam Engine: While the introduction of a steam engine is intriguing, the story lacks details about its creation and the protagonist's ability to manufacture precise parts without access to machine tools or advanced engineering techniques. Blackout: The abilities and capabilities of the Blackout group, particularly their exceptional infiltration skills, may seem overly powerful and not fully explained within the context of the medieval setting. Russell: The abrupt transformation of Russell from a peaceful painter to a murderer lacks proper character development and motivation. It would benefit the story to establish dissatisfaction or conflicts within Russell's life before depicting him as someone capable of such actions. Travel: The ease with which characters traverse between different countries without established roads raises questions about the feasibility and time constraints involved. Additionally, the annual meetings of Blackout members, requiring extensive travel, seem logistically challenging in the absence of efficient transportation systems. Overall, while the Kingdom Building series offers an engaging plot, there is room for improvement in providing more detailed explanations and addressing the logical and technical aspects of the depicted time period and technological advancements.
im at chapter 150 I like the story so far but one of the main reasons I started reading this novel is conquerer tag I hope we see some war and expansion soon because if you just keep writing on developing of the kingdom it will get boring bo matter how good you right it eventually people will get bored of it so I hope you keep in mind you need a balance between kingdombuilding and conquerer
I gave this story another chance but.. I'm still getting hung up with how Blackout gets their information or their funding. The kingdom they belong to just lost in a war.. But they dont still have money to try funding a economic sabotage? And how come they move so fast? They can get information so fast? They even have the same level of technology with the MC now. Blackout is just too OP.
I like reading Kingdom building novels and when this novel started I thought this was one of the best KB novels on web novel but recent chapters has been a huge let down. reading till chapter 350, the MC comes from a modern world yet has not shown any progress when handling diplomacy. I mean the way author has shown how diplomacy is handled by Riz or Rythium kingdom is very basic, even having a minister and ministry to handle external affairs they have not shown professionalism or handled things properly post war. Also why has author neglected the Spy network when crucial information about war and certain things have not been passed back to kingdom, the Inver issue was handled badly. Also the way war was won by being lucky is kinda let down. Hopefully author improves these things ( read other kingdom building novels if you have to).
Tbh, Its alright. My only issue is with the MC, not that he is bad his personality is to my liking, however, he does not really make much sense. His profession in his past life does not match up with all the "inventions" that he knows. Its unrealistic to the point its kind of annoying. How does a civil engineer know how to make paper? the same can be said for war weapons. We all know what a gun is, but 99 percent of us would not be able to make a gun in a medieval world. In addition, the Mc's personality shift after reincarnating is not talked about enough. Your telling me if randomly your dearest loved one had a personality shift your not even going to acknowledge it? The story is kinda entertaining because I love superior MC's, revenge, and face slapping. But the points I mentioned before unfortunately turn this into an average novel. Theres nothing wrong with average, it is not good nor is it bad. I personally recommend reading it to see if the whole irritate you or not. I wish the characters were explored a bit more so we can see why they do what they do. Its entertaining only for a little bit when only the MC and the people he cares about is smart. Overall Ill give this a solid 3, im not mad at it, but unfortunately its not for me, ill read on until chapter 100 to give an updated review, currently on chapter 35.
Spoiler de révélationi'm on chapter 265, and i think this novel deserve more readers!!! such a great kingdom building story, may as well said this is the best currently on Webnovel!!
after reading to the end lf volume 1, this novel is a hidden gem i could say. its not perfect but still a better than a lot of popular novels here. i found some chapters to be bad but most of the times its so good. this novel is underrated imo.
Incredibly well thought out. Plot development flows beautifully. The characters do need a bit more depth. Excellent work.
one of the best kingdom building novels i ever read.... just fell short a bit compared to Release That Witch. The science stuff is quite well explored but the magical part is yet to be explored but i bet this novel is way worth reading compared to those Op kingdom building novels.
the beginning of volume 1 was interesting to read and see the vast world created by the author, but the later volumes were a bit boring for me. even with more advanced gun, cannon and advanced ship technology than other kingdoms they were still unable to defeat the enemy.
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more chapter please
it is a great story with a foreshadowing of mana in the story despite its medieval take. I am just blue balled that volume 2 is not here yet hahahah
Spoiler de révélationAuteur Spartzan
good novel author. you story has potential to grow. and it's hyping with just a few chapters that I've red and it has a wonderful storyline and background coming from the perspective of mine a free reader . I hope you don't drop your story I'll always be reading your updated chapters praying for your good health mentally and physically 👌🤗✌️