/ Anime & Comics / Reincarnation as Obito Uchiha
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Synopsis
What will happens if a Naruto fan transmigrated to the Naruto world in the body of Obito Uchiha...
as one of the main antagonist of the series Obito now play with the timeline and re-write the entire series.
Timeline will be same but situation will be different.
Dark character , R-18 scenes inculcated , Over powerd Obito , Uchiha clan heritage , love+hate , fight scenes included , romance as well massacre.
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Écrire un avisReally trash novel written by a guy who has no idea about the world of Naruto. The grammar is terrible and the spelling isn’t any better. The characters are 1 dimensional and have nothing special about them. The brains of all the people are lowered to 1 IQ to fit the stupid and rash actions of the the mc. Overall I would not recommend this garbage unless you have nothing better to read
I don't want to be harsh or whatever, the idea is interesting, how it's implemented is quite rushy. Some inconsistency but it's ok, I would say as an excuse, it's a fanfic. What broke my heart was grammar, spelling and tense. There are some online correctors that exist. You can try chatgpt to help you. Not being a jerk, just trying to give you some advice to get better.
Terrible fanfiction. The author has never read or seen Naruto because the timeline of events is completely wrong.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
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The writing quality, is garbage. The story idea is good tho, the first reincarnated as Obito story I have found. The author really likes to put the Mc's name in every paragraph.
Spoiler de révélationAuthor should fix timeline instead of doubling down on his mistake which he thought was correct timeline at first but now want to glossover with "its a fanfic, get over it"
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I love naruto fanfics but I couldn't read this one. Author, you need to improve your writing, it is very confusing, the plot is very forced and the author simplifies the original plot a lot
Auteur Suryaputra_Karan
So Far Too good,Just expect from the author that he is consistent and not forget about This Series BTW Author if you need any help contact me on discord, If you need my discord Reply me