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Reincarnation as a Peerless Martial God / Cultivator with Sharingan!
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Cultivation is dangerous. So many hardships a person must go through to get to the peak of their abilities. But how much easier would it be to achieve superior strength if Lin Feng had Sharingan and canon knowledge?
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You ruined your own novel. I really liked the first 3 chapter and even had high expectations for the fanfiction but it ruined everything for me when he let Liu Fei go after trying to kill him. I mean why should he let someone go after having towards himself. Saying that he let her go because she is his future wife is complete nonsense. He isnt the real Lin Feng after all.
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This needs some editing. Some quotations start, and never end. It gets hard to distinguish the dialogue from the narration. "This is how it should start, and end; when someone is talking." 'This is the standardized notation for how thoughts(Internal Dialogue) are communicated in published stories.' -I'm not quite sure what this is, I think you use it to indicate internal dialogue, but usually, there isn't a closing mark, so...- There's some rough grammar, and poor word choice but it isn't a bad fic.
Hmm ... How to say .. It no deferent from original novel . It just only saringun added . if you want my opinion , you should make mc op or story fast peace . it would more interesting this way even if you didn't add new thing
Ух, нихуя себе, знакомая работа, не знал что автор еще и на иглише ее выкладывает, прикольно. Ну тут сто процентов 5 звезд хотя бы за то, что автор русский.
The MC babysits the original protagonist. That's all I have to say about this novel for you. Such a waste of time.
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I dropped it because I can't bear with the writing style of the author ...if he writes the story in his own language and then he uses Google translator to translate it in English , he would have way better results .. the story is pretty much a copy paste of the original with the difference being the MC having a sharingan so no character development, no world building outside of what you can find in the original novel
Geez, this story doesn't even try to change the MC character. Basically, it's just an mc with a cheat that is stronger than the original. I've hated the original MC and now it doesn't offer anything new. And seriously do people just ignore his changing eyes? I am very disappointed!!
Am a picky person when reading fan fics,as you can see from my history but reading this fan fic.. its absolutely amazing. keep up the good work and keep writing.
It would be alright if this FF didn't like the canon, something like constantly underestimated in every situation. It's too boring for me. please change that aspect for me. At least, something that makes other characters ain't stupid and offending every people.
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it's the best but it's sentences editing have to improve and Don't stop keep going I like it very much atleast complet it properly and thanks for the chapter author san more chapter please [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good fanfiction. And a very rare fandom. Personally, this is the first time I've seen fanfiction about this piece. Хороший фанфик. И очень редкий фандом. Лично я впервые вижу фанфик по этому произведению.
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what's the difference between this lin feng and the previous lin feng... Why MC going on about get rid dirt of world is he cleaner of world... Do something about MC ppersonality He becoming more like a cultivating world most righteous man is alive And not everything black and white...