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Reincarnated with a lazy system!
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Synopsis
First time writing a fanfic!
Zack who died in our world was given a chance to live again and as a sane person he took the chance.
First world: Classroom of the elite (warm-up world lol)
Second World: Black Clover
this is a wish-fulfilment story!
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good story. I just wish you could release chapters more often I hope you don’t drop good luck
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] please don't drop it
Actual review since i got mad at ch 27 as he preety much an slave to the system when it does give a quest but i just skipped cote arc since it has nothing to do with the next arc other than extra abillities also recomend author make an review so people can ask him questions about his fic but im still annoyed with how he was in the first volume but other than that its an good first fic i'll say 7.5/10 bias 4/10 due to cote.
what nobody's talking about is the writing quality. man this has alot of grammatical errors and i mean alot. from beginning to end there are spelling and grammar errors and it seems like there will be no improvement moving forward. you should do what another fanfic did where they made a chapter and edited the chapter making sure there were as little amounts of errors in the chapters. they were translating a fanfiction and they manually edited every chapter to make sure every chapter was desent. otherwise story is good character design is fine not good but fine.
please go to danmachi world or tensura world for unique or ultimate skill and true hero / true demon lord / true dragon + digital lifeform
its not that good considering the updates, rates and title. Mc personality is switching one time he tryna be scared and another second he'll be showing his skills and powers. just decide first which approach deos this mc want like he tryina be like lowkey and popular also its cringe too. too much smiling like foolish, mood switching i just can't hope u will improve it i know this is your first novel but first understand the foundation of anime or character if you want to properly write. when i furst saw the fanfic of cote i got excited but no i got dissapointed like how he be getting 10 million points like that easily and the plot is also not that accurate sorry but i just can't read it.