Reincarnated In Naruto With Pervert System [Smut/Hentai/R18]

LV 15

50points

I enjoy the story this is due to the humor yes the MC is slave to the system, but honestly I have not read many of those stories lately and the choices are rather screwed if you do screwed if you don't. As for fresh idea the premise of reincarnation to the Naruto-verse has happened a lot (fanfic) most are really the same boring storyline this story is more of a different aspect. it gives a feeling of not trying to take itself seriously and it's refreshing. I hope to see a continuation to the story and I plan to continue to support it. NOw on to the review as far as grammatical errors there are either few or nothing that you will not fix as you read the story. Character development- still a new story give it some time to show results (somewhat slow). World background- obvious where we are. Updates- relatively stable more so than others I have read. story development similar to character development rather slow currently, but it's still a newer story. Finally character design- MC thoughts are made known, actions show an actual reaction, and personal change can be noted in certain areas. once again story is still new and information may change in the future.

LV 4

TentaPriest

This MC picks some weird system options. Don't like it. If I am forced into similar options I would certainly make different choices.

LV 14

Quake_Midaro

Just another trashy System Slave Cringe fest not worth reading unless your into that completely disappointing and just plain unlikable the MC is absolute trash as well which doesn't help any either ignore this fic there's better with the same concept this ine is a complete failure

LV 1

Sajith_K_Philip

The story has only started but hopefully it won’t be a disappointment. The system also needs to be more ironed out. 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄

LV 4

Dio_Brandon

You know author, if you repeat the same joke in a work at the beginning it will be funny but in the long run it becomes very boring and it only takes me 10 chapters to be bored.

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

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LV 4

MagusTheSupreme

I don't know why would anyone report this story. No one is forcing you to read it and there are way smuttier stories in the app. I personally like the story, it's really funny. keep up the good work. 👍🌹

LV 13

John_Clamble

Fun story. Definitely comedic at it's core. As long as you're taking the book as seriously as it takes itself, this book is definitely a fun read. The interactions with the system and characters are pretty hilarious, and it's got some nice ecchi scenes too. Looking forward to what comes in the future for the novel.

LV 13

Willie_Lombard

I've got to say this is one of the best fan fics I've read so far of the narutoverse. when pay day comes I'll definitely start supporting you mate. damn 😁👍🫡

LV 1

Daoist3PgKGI

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LV 14

Aayann_

This is the funniest fanfic I ever read but where is smut mission start or he gonna do it without the help😁😁😂 of system😎.

LV 11

Akaza14

Author anyone who drops it dosent know the full definition of art this is a masterpiece please translate till the end ill start dropping stones