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This story will start sometime before Spartan 2 program starts ( for those who don’t know this is the program that created those super soldiers like Master Chief) also be aware that a system will exist
Alex was a regular soldier, he as been one since he was 18 years old, he is 30 now and for that reason he was told to leave the army since he was getting old and not improving his ranks.
He went to a lot for some time and died alone with a disease, but against all logic he wake up in is dream, but it would not be that easy.
Author: Hello this is my first time writing and please be aware that my main language is not English but I will try my best
Hope you like it :)
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Just read your novel today think your doing a awesome job. I believe Master Chief is a Bad ass and sometimes a Lone wolf. But that is all Spartans, since they were trained to be elites and I like how you made them into Special Forces where elites work as a team. Killing off a few to make them Guardians in the shadows is a great idea. can add side stories or better the mission when the "surviving Spartans" do other missions. Adding more to read and cliffhangers. Don't mind the haters. They just don't like fully developed stories. So far, good job. You keep writing and I'll keep reading.
This is the best book that doesn’t repeat the same type of story like how someone just dies and reincarnates in a already existing novel like tails of demons and gods, against the gods, and etc so this is also one or only novel about halo as well and I do truly like how the character is and also how he mainly helps john 117, and how helpful he is to the others.
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I'm am happy with your work and your creativity it was cool and I enjoyed reading it but couldn't you speed up the realist of the other characters please.
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Love it plz keep up the good work. Its a nice change of pace from all the other fan fic. Right how you want dont let people tell you how to right.
Great story so far I hope this story goes on for a long time because I haven't seen a lot of halo fanfic. I hope far in the future he somehow meets his parents again but it's just an idea,anyways keep up the great work you got my views and stones.
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To bad you droped it, it's hard to find halo fanfics nowadays ..............................................................................
This is a great story, but I’d like to know if you ever plan on continuing with it.................................................................
Book is awesome so far I like were it is going I just hope it gets continued as it has a lot of promise! The story has almost the perfect amount of detail some sections could use a little more. Overall please don't leave us hanging here author I'm hooked already Haha!
I'm witnessing a lot of potential here so keep it up author and don't get out bounds in your own story or you might mess it up. Go and make this story butt **** awesome for all of us which are you readers!
Love the story so far and it helps that My first real game was halo 2 for the original X-Box so this is a realt interesting story for me so keep it going and i cant Wait for the next up date even Tho it hasent updated in a while Im eating for the next chapter to come out untill then cya around!
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I just loved the story and the direction the story is heading. The story relates to actual halo lore but it does seem like that may change a little but its not a bad thing. The story is fun to read and it has to do with halo so it automatically gets a like from me.
Please don't drop your novel as it's so good and may reach to the god for it's awesomeness and if you add harem and R-18 then army building and some conquest it will be a perfect representation of his life in a vast space. Thank you for listening to my comment see ya and please don't drop this novel.
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This would have been way better had the mc not given the ability to use the system to others. Idc how important they’re to each other or how good of a person he is, he just gave up everything that made him worthy of being called the mc. If everyone has his power he’s no longer special.
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I love this Fanfiction so much. Absolutely the best Halo Fanfiction I have ever read in my life. Wonderful building of the plot and story. If I was to be isekai'd I would probably choose this MC. Keep up the AWESOMENESS of your work.
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good story slow updates.................................................................................................................................. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Good work on the storyline. Halo has bee one of my favourite games , have even reAd the novels. It's good that such a story is being written. It is interesting. Thanks
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this is sick!!!! finally a halo fan fic so far so good keep going and plz don't drop looking forward to future chapter and don't disappear suddenly like some authors i h8 :( thanks for writing this and i hope you enjoy writing this as much as we do reading this =)