I might be stupid I had a difficult time trying to read it all of it just felt weird. Okay what are the mc powers like you spend almost the entire 1st chapter writing on Marie we already know her story anyway the biggest thing is that the Mc didn’t get enough screen time. Anyway I hope as the story progresses this gets better and the mc has some op powers or maybe anime/comic characters powers.
I might be stupid I had a difficult time trying to read it all of it just felt weird. Okay what are the mc powers like you spend almost the entire 1st chapter writing on Marie we already know her story anyway the biggest thing is that the Mc didn’t get enough screen time. Anyway I hope as the story progresses this gets better and the mc has some op powers or maybe anime/comic characters powers.