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reincarnated in a fantasy world as a rathalos
Auteur: Jamale_Holdman
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what happens when a young boy named Vince and his girlfriend Trinity are reborn as their favorite monster from their favorite game monster Hunter world
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The first couple of chapters are a bit rough to read, they have no breaks between paragraphs and there is little to no punctuation, but all this is mostly fixed in later chapters. As far as grammar goes, there are a few mistakes here and there, like sentences missing “and” or things being spelled wrong. For the most part it does not take away from the reading experience and you can still understand what is being said. I like the overall concept of the story and I will continue to read more chapters as they come out. Keep up the good work Author!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………