Synopsis
As Orson read the novel written by the girlfriend who had left him, he gently remarked on how terrible the story was. But then, noticing a foul smell coming from the kitchen, he went to investigate. He realized there was some kind of gas leak. Already furious about being dumped, Orson became even angrier at the state of his kitchen, and in his rage, he hit the light switch with a powerful punch. Naturally, the explosion that followed killed him instantly, and Orson passed into the afterlife.
After spending some time in limbo, he found himself reincarnated in an unfamiliar world. However, he quickly realized he had been reborn inside the cliché-filled novel written by his ex-girlfriend. As if that wasn’t enough, he had ended up in the body of Neonidas, a useless duke who was also the fiancé of the story's villainess.
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There may be a bit too much swearing and slang in the first chapters, but it gets less afterwards.
There will be no yuri, bl or ntr in Neonidas(MC) harem
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Écrire un avisI've found another potential diamond !! . my luck is insanely good these days. pacing is good. mc is slowly getting stronger and has likeable personality. World building is decent.. though power system is not explained till now ,hope author does it in future . I like the info-dump in this novel where it is slow and gradual unlike when authors simple put 3 pages worth info at the very beginning ( which I'll definitely skip lmao🤣). nice start .. hope author keeps it up and doesn't bottle potential banger
The grammar is a major let down for this novel. The interactions between the characters are very bland, robotic you may say. The plot however is interesting nonetheless. But I didn't really like how the mc easily revealed a vital information about his future knowledge which can lead to bad development if the author runs out of ideas. Also this seems to be going more on the wish fulfilment side, I didn't like the pokemon ahh harem. Not my cup of tea [img=faceslap]
Spoiler de révélationabsolutely perfect. There is not a single chapter where u will feel bored. great job author ,will be waiting for upcoming chapters👍. And yes if possible increase Romance scenes with Solara.
I really loved this novel author keep it up the story is going good i just have a suggestion don't go too deep on harem or sex story is more important but having some fan service is also nice and i just saw character illustration and i love it it doesn't feel to unreal and another thing i just saw that solara was on number 1 on popularity so I just used all my coins and everything to increase the popularity on empress mother of allea i have increased it by 11,000 so now she's number one my mommy [img=update]
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