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Aww sh1t, I knew it... With the length of the fanfic and the poop way of following the plot with nearly no change... I honestly would ask you to just read first.. Read all the novel in online website, the authentic canon and those good fanfic... Read and learn from their work.. If you still want to write, learn from them first.. If not, your next fanfic will still the same as this.. A poop.
It's just an overview with minor things changed. It's not even that good to be honest, cause most of the time if not all the time theirs a spelling error. Not even because the letter is to close to each other, like for and far. Stupid spelling mistakes that could've been fixed if he reread what he was writing. They were very common mind you, because of that sometimes entire paragraphs didn't make sense, so as the reader you have to reread it, sometimes numerous times because that one word could mean anything. Next time you try to write a story proofread after you finish the chapter or every other paragraph.
HERE IS I, YOUR UNCLE ROJER HOPING YOU TO CONTINUE THIS FANFIC, YOU KNOW WHAT YOUR UNCLE ROJER LOVE THIS SUMMARIES OF YOUR SO THAT YOUR UNCLE ROJER KNOW WHAT HAPPEN IN THE CANNON 😂😂😂 .
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the writing is good no doubt... but we got no character interaction .. time skips all the time and all in all every chapter feels like a summary of the actual chapter and it isent much different from cannon .. so all i can say really is that his grammar is good and honestly the rest kinda sucks ?
too fast paced it's just like Summarizing the Original story and adding something in there >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_> >_>