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A boy from the real world gets reborn In MHA as Haku from Naruto, but the god who reincarnates him makes a mistake.
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good book nice writing nice style!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
English is not my first language This is a typical story of a great idea but a novice writer who doesn’t know what to do haku is a ninja genius who although he didn’t reach Hashirama level would undoubtedly be a kage level power and see this story making a person with such a person simple to inherit his power is discouraging instead of saying that he is the haku it is better to say that he is a ninja of the yuki clan (clan of the haku) random without genius or personality she simply accepts the things that happen to her in 12 episodes the thing more "exciting" was a kick that she gave to bakugo I can't even say it is a story not of combat but of romance because there isn't, episode 9 "a friend of the mother arrives" episode 10 "without explanation they moved from house to flame the face of father "a shame to the name of haku the ninja genius of the ice. (PT-BR)inglês não é minha primeira lingua Essa é uma história típica de uma ótima ideia mas um escritor novato que não sabe o que faz haku é um ninja gênio que embora não chegasse ao nivel Hashirama sem duvida seria uma potência de nível kage e ver essa história fazendo uma pessoa com uma pessoa tão simples herdar seu poder é desanimador em vez de falar que ele é o haku é melhor falar que ele é um ninja do clã yuki(clã do haku) aleatório sem genialidade ou personalidade ela simplesmente aceita as coisas que acontecem com ela em 12 episidios a coisa mais "emocionante" foi um chute que ela deu no bakugo não da nem pra falar que é uma história não de combate mas de romance porque nao tem, episódio 9 "chega um amigo da mãe" episódio 10 "sem explicação mudaram de casa ate chama o cara de pai" uma vergonha ao nome de haku o ninja genio do gelo
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I honestly enjoy the book from what i read so far. Its missing some plot points and some minit grammar issues but other than that, its pretty well made.
It is very good the quality of writing development of the history of the world, especially for me, who love MHA but it takes a long time to launch a new chapter, already 2 months ago
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I have expected for the mc to be more powerful. But no she seems to be quite average. Needs to be more grammatically correct. Other than that needs to have more in depth character interaction and character emotion development. I don't mind the story being being coherent with mha plot since mha is one of my favourite anime. But I would like it though if it had a bit of a spin off.
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Reading Status: C16 Writing Quality 3-stars Stability of Updates 4-stars Story Development 3-stars Character Design 3-stars World Background 5-stars
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The grammar is terrible. The words parasites are found in almost every paragraph. And most importantly, it pisses me off that there are SEVERAL paragraphs IN A ROW that begin with the word "Then". Well, so, it seems interesting, the plot is not complicated and there are no jumps from topic to another
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