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My first attempt at something like this...
I don’t really know how to start this and I don’t know how this is going to continue in the long run so please don’t be surprised if many things are still undecided.
English isn’t my first language and my knowledge of most novels, animes and other series I am going to use is fairly limited, so please tell me any mistakes I make.
I appreciate any criticism you have, because it is the only way to get better.
My uploads are also going to be fairly random... probably.
Now to the story:
I am not confident enough to develop my own set of characters so I chose the easy option of reincarnating the mc as an already existing one.
And who would be better suited for that role than a character that gets reduced to a harem member in most fanfictions. Namely...
Albedo (Overlord)
The story starts out in an Overlord AU where none of the Supreme Beings remained until the end of Yggdrasil, so our resident Overseer has to take the things into her own hands.
I plan to send The Great Tomb of Nazarick to other worlds later in the story, because I am not confident enough in my own imagination to fill this fanfiction with only one world.
The power system is going to be that of Overlord and Albedo is going to be able to access the player interface and learn new things in form of skills and class levels.
But nothing is set in stone and everything I have just written might very well change in the future.
I hope you enjoy the story.
( I don’t own anything except for any OCs I might introduce in future chapters)
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so far super intresting and i dont see any grammar errors prob cuz english isnt my main language nice new way of crossover super intresting i have high expectations for this
So far it's pretty interesting and I'm enjoying it, there are some typing mistakes but it isn't really noticeable and they can be easily ignored. I'd say it's a pretty interesting concept. Hope author doesn't give up on this fanfic, and continues writing. I think it could turn out really good in the future. The author might already be doing this but I will say it anyways, if you aren't sure about how some words are spelt its always fine to google it. All in all has a lot of potential and is a really nice read.
This is a first for me to see the MC as Albedo and still being in the game. It is really interesting since it's also Yuri which is a plus~ Man since Albedo will basically left in charge after all of them left. It will be very interesting to see without Momonga being there. Even if just imagining the MC tsukkomi at Momonga or when the MC comments about things that happened in the game. Also Momonga learning that the MC is basically aware since the day she was created will be very amusing. Sad that I can't get to see his reaction. Though how are you going to explain Momonga not there being in the end since as far as I know he is one loyal dude and being Guildmaster kinda compels him to stay. I guess I'll just look forward to how the MC going to handle being the leader of that guild If the members all quits since technically being Overseer it is kinda her job to handle them when the members are not there.
Well-crafted fanfiction, but the author so far has hammered in writing new chapters. I can't wait for the author to write a new chapter.I hope he still writes ...
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This is very well written. I’m honestly surprised English isn’t your first language. The premise is also something I haven’t seen before so I’m looking forward to reading more.
I would like to admit i've read this when it was at the bottom of the fanfic books and I am very suprised. The fights aren't long enough but i can understand that, Whats bugging me is that Albedo ( before reincarnation ) is kind of lacking for me. But other than that Its very good
Yuri / Albedo / Well written = 5,0 =) <#333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
Oooh this feels so good, at chapter 12 its ending just as we get to the good part, I cant wait for this to be updated! Author your great! I usually have issues with finding new novels as I can run through a bunch and tell that they aren't my thing but this fits perfectly!
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Amazing I just wish that the author would update it again ABcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz ABcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz ABcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz ABcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz
So far interesting, great story development, updates ?, character design is good too Gghgggkgkgkkgkgkgkgkgkkgkgkgkgkgkgkgkkgkgkgkgkgkgkkgkgkgkgkgkgkkgkgk
its actually pretty good I really like the crazyness and thought process of the mc. the only problem is it seems to have been dropped I am not sure since the authour didnt give any announcment about dropping it but since he hasnt updated for 3 months I can only guess that it is dropped. but I would still like you to clarify if you are gonna continue it or not. cause this has a lot of potential. secondly it does have some grammatical mistakes but they are hardly noticable.
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