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Reborn as a warp god with a warp system in Warhammer 40k
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[Note: Warhammer 40 K belongs to its right full distributors traders and manufactures all I’m doing with this is making a fun fanfiction that no one else has tried and I hope it entertains my readers I am not trying to make a profit out of this this is just for fun reading and typing on my part I hope the community is satisfied for what I’ve made to entertain so my grim dark readers let’s dive into an endless galaxy at war.
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There's only one chapter out but this is a unique idea that I (personally) really want to see explored please don't drop it and thank you for making this in fact you know what you get author?
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The story idea is good. This Idea is seldom used. But in all honesty ,it’s unreadable at the moment. There are no punctuations and the grammar is all over the place. It’s hard to make heads or tales of what’s happening.
My #1 issue with this work so far is the grammar. Please do improve upon it, it's very difficult to read at times. I'd suggest Grammarly, it's free. .........................................
Honestly, the idea is amazing but it really doesn't matter if you have the best idea for a history if your grammar is as bad as that of a child. 2.6 - 4 if not for the Grammar
protagonist being controlled by the system. trash💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
I love your story and there aren't many system stories in Warhammer and yours is amazing and well plotted and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :D
I thought the idea was dumb but gave it a shot. I was pleasantly surprised how good this story is, I've never been huge into 40k but this may have just made me a fan. That is if the books lore games etc are close to this fun.
You had me a 'rifle distributors' (I assume you meant rightful), the story's great so far at chapter 9 Filler text filler text filler text filler text
lots of potentional and great book so far. makes me want to read more of this fan fictions constantly. ........140
I love the story and how it's changing everything at once. Please don't drop it. I don't see many good warhammer 40k stories
T’was a good read, wish the update schedule could be a bit better but it is understandable that it is not. Keep up the good work cus I can’t wait for more progression 👍 ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………
Me encanta la idea y espero más capítulos es genial el fic de warhammer 40 k ya quiero que te enfrentes a los dioses del caos. ya quiero ver la guerra y los cambios que harás en el mundo de warhammer
the fic is very interesting to say the least, if there is one problem tho it would be the lack of proof reading and editing. its understandable enough but if the author could improve along the way I hope he goes back to early chapters and edit the mistakes.
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Bro, the story is good, but you need to work on your grammar. If you want an editor, I can do that for you, just so we don't have to suffer.
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FOR THE EMPEROR. just being W 40K gives it 5 stars..........................................................................................