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Reborn as a Diablos in fate?!
4.34 (10 audimat)
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I am new but i will make this the best that i can make it.
Jackson was going home from his work when the most cliche thing had happen, a child wanting to rush home had crossed the street not noticing the truck rushing down the street as though a mad man was behind the wheel, but Jackson noticed and reading those fanfic and novel had filled him in thought so he took his chance's in his belief and rushed to the child.
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Having read up to chapter 18, I think I'm qualified enough to rate this book.As of chapter 18, these are all the things I have to say, I'll list them below.1. The pacing and length of the chapters are way too slow and short. As of chapter 18, apparently, only 2-3 days have passed since Mc's rebirth.2. The grammar is straight up horrendous, and it doesn't even seem like a narration. It feels like a summary of the story that the author is just writing down and publishing. At most points in the story, the author is only making comparisons with other things describing what the Mc is doing, which in my opinion is not bad, but he does it almost every paragraph and it's getting repetitive and annoying to read all the time. The comparisons are quite ludicrous. Forgive me, for I have forgotten what the term is called in English, for I've finished school for a while now.3. The fight scenes are very lackluster and boring, and I just scan through them with the most bored look gracing my face.4. The author seems to lack a lot when it comes to writing ability and I hope he learns from this and gets better, I only kept reading cause I happened to like both monster hunters and fate and him bringing those ideas together drew in my attention, but I was severely disappointed when I started reading.I hope the author can improve his writing and Grammer in general. Don't forget to use your capital letters and apostrophes. You're not doing that a lot.I had a lot more than this to say, but I seemed to have forgotten, so just go with that for now 😅
why'd i vote 5 stars my own work? because I have faith in myself, yes I'm shameless and I don't careIf you have any complaints do type them in the comments I do want to improve and their is a difference between constructive criticism and just criticism just tell where I need to improve and I'll see what I can do.
Well, the prologue is horrible. I jumped in front of a car waiting for brother isekai. is it serious And not to mention wishes. Apart from that, the chapters are fine, it is not the best or the worst
Je suis au chapitre 14-15 J'aime l'idée. Je ne peux pas en dire beaucoup vue qu'il y a juste 14~15 chapitres mais d'après moi ça va dans la bonne direction D'habitude quand on prend un monstre de Monster hunter on prend un dragon ancien très puissant mais ici on prend un Diablo. La seule critique que j'ai est que certains personne pourrait ne pas bien comprendre comment augmenter les attributs, personnellement d'après ce que j'ai compris, si il veux augmenter sa statistiques de défense faut qu'il prend des coup et si ses ces muscles, il doit faire de la musculation (imaginer vous un Diablo qui fais des jumping jack) c'est ma compréhension il se peut que j'ai mal compris Ça c'est un message pour l'auteur : Merci pour ce livre et j'espère que vous abandonner pas, je serai triste 😭😭
No hay verdad en la carne, solo traición. No hay fuerza en la carne, solo debilidad. No hay constancia en la carne, solo decadencia. No hay certeza en la carne, excepto la muerte
Perfect, Down to the very last detail. Perfect. …………………………………………………. …………………………………………………. …………………………………………………. …………………………………………………. ………………………………………………….
a concept that IS really interesting. there are only 2 chapters Out as of now but both are of good quality. my only Hope is that this book doesnt Go into " i'm now human Form ". Overall its a solid read.