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Psycopath Through Multiverse: AnimeVerse
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Synopsis
It is about a Psycopath if given a chace what he will do to the world that he will visit.
First World: My Hero Academia (MHA)
Genre:Psycopath,Villain,R18,Rape maybe if needed,Gore,Reincarnated.
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This is my first story. Please point out the mistakes that i have made at the end of of the chapter.
And please tell if i should continue writing more chapters.
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At first the book was ok but then somethings was really forced or did not make sences for example. it forced when he got a perfect quirk for his goal but I can look pass that but what I can’t look pass is how he barly use for example he want to hired Assien to kill momo and momo mom even after he took mom dad body when he could quite littly just control them and not take unsarry risk. also after assination attem at his life he figure out ( without any real prove) that his wife did it and driver help instead of just contol his wife he still try to kill her and contol the driver
Hello author, Your book has potential but I could not keep on reading because of the grammar. All the mistake I see ate making it hard for me to follow the story. NRNL