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Chapitre 3: True face

Child came close to the lake while being cautious about his surroundings.

Only thing that was there was forest, forest surrounding him on all sides.

Strange was that since the start of his little journey he did not encounter a single animal.

When he was very close to the lake he looked down on lake's mirror image of himself.

"It seems that even in this world my appearance hasn't changed.

I'm still this same 5 years old strange boy that i was.

My blonde, messy hair hasn't changed at all, just like my ocean-blue eyes.

It's strange to see 5yo with my maturity, huh?

Probably it's due to my 'death fate'. Since I was young I learned fast.

Is that part of torture so I will understand more about death and life?

Trully I don't know nor I care about finding it out now.

Wait! What was my name? I... I don't remember? Why?

Is it related to the guy that brought me here?"

*rumble*

"Ahhh. I'm hungry.

Maybe there isn't any animals here but there should be some berries or something."

Boy found some fruits and ate them. After that he went to continue his journey and to find a place that he can call 'home'. He went deeper in the forest and made a camp there.

When he wanted to rest he heard a noice comming from the bushes.

Noice became more and more louder.

After a while he saw a hand comming from this same bushes.

From the forest a strange person came, covered in a robe, with black eyes.

Boy felt fear and didn't know if he will be alive after their meeting.


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So today 1k views probably, huh?

Now there is 691, I hope you will like my story :D

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Chapitre 4: Encounter

At this moment strange man with black eyes wearing a robe was standing in front of a kid.

"What are you doing alone here? And who are you? I have never seen you here. Oh, by the way, my name is Asura"

Though he looked scary, his words were reassuring.

"I-I... I don't know"

A: "Hmmmm? Strange. A kid abandoned in forest? Something like this shouldn't have happened in this world.

Boy, there is a village nearby where I am living. Do you want to go with me?"

"O-Ok, I will go."

After a while they entered the village. There were a lot of houses but it was too quiet like a ghost town.

"Why is it so quiet here?"

A: "They are probably scared of new thing such as you are.

We need to go to village chief. There you might be accepted as a member of our community."

"If you say so."

In the middle of the village there was a house that was standing out from other. It was separated from other ones and taller. It looked kinda like a watchtower.

Inside the house was one person. Old man with short sideburns, moustache and beard tho his hair was longer and combed back.

O: "Hmmm, so this is the story."

A: "Yes, even I don't know how it might have happened."

"Ummm, how should i call you?"

O: "Just call me old man, it's easier that way, isn't it?"

"You don't have a name? Or maybe you just forgot it..."

O: "Are you the one to talk here?"

"Ugh."

O: "Pfff... Ahhahahahah

I have a name but everybody here calls me chief or old man so I kinda forgot about it.

But here is the problem. If you don't have a name then maybe I can just give you one.

Hmmmm... What about 'Chron'? Do you like it?"

C: "Y-Yes, I like it"

O: "So let it be it.

Now Chron, tell me what happened that you ended up in the forest."

C: "Ok, but i don't know if you will believe it."

O: "Hooo? I have lived for a long time and I don't think that a story of a few years old brat could possibly made me shocked. Then. Let us hear your story."


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Sorry for laet updale.

I have a lot of family matters and i simply don't have time :/

As a compensation I should release few extra chapter tomorrow.

Hope you will understand.

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