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Chapitre 16: Domain

Old man: "Little one, I have told you that you should be more concentrated than usual, haven't I?"

Chron: "Yup, I triend to control it but it seems that I'm still lacking in that area."

O: "So what were you truing to do with that lightning?"

C: "Isn't that obvious? I tried to hit you but it struck around one meter before you."

O: "Nope. It was direct hit."

C: "Huh? What do you mean?"

O: "I have the ability to control lightning. My overall control is so great that I have some kind of protection all the time. Every lightning will bounce off from me when it will be too close. It's very convinient. Also this lightning protection can be used to attack too when enemy is too close."

C: "Hmmmm. So it's something like lightning armor. I will try it next time. Can you check the sky and tell me what can I do to improve it?"

O: "Improve what exacl.. OH MY GOD"

At that point old man looked up to the sky. It was all covered in clouds that emitted a lot of mana and pure force from it. It looked like a circle with radius of 50 meters.

O: "To create such a domain it usually takes few years, no, even over ten years. Yet you are already able to create domain that suits your style.

Then maintain it and try releasing few lightning bolts from the clouds. They all should hit this same target. If you are able to do this then I will think about other magic."

C: "Ok."

Chron tried few times but failed.

O: "Looks like it's still hard for you, huh?"

C: "Y-Yeah... maybe."

O: "What's with your way of speaking? You're hiding something from me."

C: "Hehe. So you found out. Try using lightning on me."

O: "If you want it so much."

Old man released his lightning at Chron but this same lightning bounced off.

O: "Y-You're able to use this same ability as me? Unbelievable."

C: "It was hard to think about how to do it but I succeded. Aren't I a genius?"

O: "Yes, you are. I think it's time to teach you about demon's magic."


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