Synopsis
this is the story of Aiden-El, twin brother to Sho-El tho separated by many years, they both come from the same source, Zoa.
Zoa is the oldest and most powerful of all Kryptonian Gods. He is both a Martial Arts God as well as a God of Creation.
Aiden and Sho are both created at the same time but Zoa sends both to seperate ends of the Omniverse. They are meant to protect the Omniverse in Zoa's place after he was punished and eternally sealed by all the other Kryptonian Gods.
Join Aiden as he discovers worlds across the Omniverse as he grows in strength, becoming a god that protects life.
Aiden will journey to worlds both known and unknown. He makes friends and possibly lovers along the way.
I only own my own original character and do not have any copyrights to the world and stories that the MC enters. There may be worlds that I do create but that would be later.
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Just imagine superman but many times stronger in stone age without any alien invasion and any super powered individuals, wearing his dress all time, using his powers against humans at every turn to solve every problem. And everyone likes and accepts him. Only Lady Stark's actions and fears make some sense. **It doesn't suit my taste.**
I'll give it a 5 because I was entertained but this isn't for everyone. A lot of the story is just a retelling of the original GoT story. Like imagine a decent author wrote a summary about GoT but every now and then his OC shows up and changes things around. If it weren't for the fact that I've read all the GoT books and enjoyed them I don't think I would've liked this. Still though, grammar isn't bad, MC is likeable although he's a little too much of a protagonist sometimes.
The history is very well writed, the grammar was without any noticeable issue, world building was good as long as you have some knowledge of the histories the fanfic are based, even thou normally would be underwhelming see such a OP Mc in a low powered world, the way it was writed in fact make the history flow smoothly; the only complain I would have is that the history was marked as a "R18" but until now all such scenes had been writed off-screen, I would like to know if it will be all like this or If the author just didn't want to write such scenes with side-characters.
Good as always mate👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
you cant give a story the title "across the omni verse" if he stays in Westeros for the entirety of the story, its misleading, i mean over 70 chapters and still in one world? nope
Excellent story. One of the best works done. Was a little worried about the crossover with Superman lore and Game of Thrones but it works. Things changed and for the better. Want more and more!
I am enjoying so far(about 30 chapters in), the character is not superman as he doesn’t have the no kill rule. Overall i feel like his early childhood could have been developed more and shown another side of rule under aerys as some got ffs have done. Overall it’s not bad for some easy reading, it has good grammer and dialogue so I will definitely keep reading 😉
great love it hopes author continue it.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍