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Primordial Descent
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Before the birth of the world, there existed 6 primordial Aspects, which govern the nature and structure of everything in existence, and the ones who controlled them were none other than the supreme beings... The Primordial ones.
However, of these six, there was one who sought to destroy the world and the system in which it operated. The Primordial of the sixth Aspect.
This caused a great war in the Heavenly realm, causing the other 5 to rise against him. He was struck down, stripped of his Aspect and ultimately destroyed. Eventually, the world would come to know him as the Evil one, the god of despair... The Demon God.
After several centuries and millennia have passed, the feared one has awakened. His rage and wrath unstoppable. Now he must have his vengeance on the 5 Primordials who betrayed him, retrieve his Aspect and destroy the world as he had intended from the beginning.
This is the story of Hexarion... The Primordial of the Void, and the one who consumes all.
Alternative Title: Primordial Descent. HEX: Aspect Of The Void
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This is a solid 5/5. I love the way the storyline began. Although I'm not a fan of POV styled stories, this one got me pulled in. Hexarion is an interesting MC. Quite meticulous as well. This is worth reading, I recommend.
Alright! I'm back after so long. This book is over 200 chapters long now, so it deserves a new review. I'd say it's still a stellar story, just not for everyone. Our Mc is depicted to be an evil person, but just a chapter later he saves someone. Some might drop the book because of that, but if advise you to read on. Also, he sometimes acts or thinks in a weirdly immature or petty way—at least in the beginning chapters. Many would also drop because of this. I'd advise you to keep going, though. Why? Because it's a good story! As you progress further in, you'll realize that the novel is golden. You might have some issues with the MC, Hexarion, but those issues become less glaring at some point. You might even love him eventually. So, yes. This book is still a Five Stars in my book! Thanks for picking up this book, and I hope you have a good read.
Hello Readers, or potential ones. I want to mention the fact that the Mc is evil, or more accurately, does very evil things for the sake of his goals. That doesn't mean he doesn't do good things if he feels like it, so long as it doesn't really bother him. However, some have mentioned that my mc is too soft, but if you're patient enough to read to chapter 9-10, you'll find out he's actually very cruel. If you're still not convinced, be patient and read up to chapter 30. That will clear all the doubts you have. It's a wonderful story and I've gotten a lot of wonderful and positive feedbacks more than negative. I just want you to have this in mind before diving in. You're in for a treat, trust me. PS. From the start he is shown to be evil, however do not be surprised if he does some seemingly good acts. You'll soon find that everything revolves around him.
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The novel is dropped in chapter 6, the cruel hero and villain that's what the writer is trying to show, he saves the poor fairy from death and tries to justify himself that it's only for the eyes or that it's interesting and not because he's a perverted hero, obvious hypocrisy, no need to lie and justifications just save her without a play
It looks promising, the character gives me an Overlord vibe. Taking your other works into account, I am excited on this one.
Good piece of work. I love how it's in the first person format. I can really feel his feelings better and it's more relatable. Something tells me those gods aren't as good as they seem tho, or is it just me?
Ride on author. Please update more frequently. Talia is gonna be a mad character I'm sure of it. Let's just wait for character development to kick in. So sear readers or potential ones, you've come to the right place.
Overall I think it's a good novel, since it's just starting I can only hope for a more stable and wonderful release. It has mad potential though. The other gods and Primordials seem to be the bad guys in my book.
Nice work. Nice concept and plot. I'm liking this! I have always been a big fan of dark and overpowered characters. Keep it up author. Please update frequently
I follow IN VERSION and Project: Helix. This one shows a lot of promise. As expected author.
Okay so I'm only about halfway through what is available to read right now ( chap. 156ish) at this point in the story I have to say it has been very well thought out. No glaring plot holes or inconsistencies. The plot flows from one scenario to another smoothly. Not many grammar errors. So the Mc is a powerful primordial God of destruction who begins to question his and the other gods origins. He decides to destroy the world that he and his family of primordial gods have made to their outrage. He loses the fight to be reborn on the very planet he wanted to destroy and is on a journey to rebuild his strength and have his revenge. If you are down for a dark MC who is meticulous, cunning, ruthless, and merciless this is your novel. The mc has been shown to have a very deep grasp of most situations allowing for a near perfect idea of what would play out allowing him to manipulate most situations to his absolute favor. He also is showing signs of maybe growing as well. Perhaps his time on the world he and his family made will change his outlook a little... or not we shall see .
Spoiler de révélation Thank you all for your support readers. We won the Bronze Prize for the WPC. I'll be resuming my chapter publishing on the 7th of next month. Once it begins, we'll be going on a wild ride. I welcome comments, reviews and even criticisms, no matter how harsh. I also welcome encouragements. Once again, let's have a wonderful and dark read... It is about an Evil Protagonist after all.
My siblings and I all read this book, and it's no surprise why. The story is amazing, a mix of both comedy and tragedy, with hints of romance, at least in my opinion. If I have any complaints it'll be that the mc is so sadistic, but I guess that's one of his charms😅
Amazing! Simply Amazing!!! I like the plot from the very synopsis and then the first chapter. I'll totally recommend this book to everyone, in fact I'm recommending it now.
I hope talia dies painfully and is unable to be ressurected and no I will never enjoy her presence. However, everything else about the novel is great.
Loving the story so far.. and the readable writing quality. No MTL or unreadable english. Hoping you don't drop it. Would love to see how this story continues to develop, love the OP MC vibe.
Haven't enjoyed a novel as much as this one! Plot is basically trying to get revenge and destroying the world, but it's still very exciting since there's really no guarantee that Void Jesus will actually be able to do so. The characters are very distinct from each other, they've got personalities that stand out from other "similar" novels. Void Jesus does things for his benefit, he doesn't hesitate to kill or maim others. His actions don't stray from how the author wants to portray him as (very cool because that takes a whole lot of skill). So far, the events aren't boring or expected. Characters are very dynamic and consistent. Story is definitely worth the try! :D