(' ' = when someone is talking/thinking inside their head, " " when someone is talking)
A man in his late thirties was walking down the street with the rain pouring down on him.
He was wearing what looked to be a once black business suit that is now faded grey. This man is obviously Tian Dapo (roughly translating into "Heaven Break"), although a domineering name he looks like a beggar you would see in the bad parts of town.
If you would look closely at him Tian was actually quite handsome with scarlet eyes, a naturally rough abyss deep black hair that looks like a crow's nest and a face that of a Greek God. However, if you'd gaze into his eyes you would see them as lifeless.
Tian has been ridiculed and bullied his entire life even in some of his jobs. He lost his parents at the tender age of 7 and has been in the orphanage until 16 when his education was finished and he was kicked out. Feeling absolutely nothing as he crosses the street with traffic lights red, abruptly a blinding flash of light comes from his right and the rumbling of tires of a bumpy road. As Tian turns his head to look at the car that is about to run him over with a smile that is almost never seen unless he is indulging in his hobby 'Finally, sweet release from this hell', and a loud noise of bones cracking and meat being squished.
*CRAAAAACCKKKK*
Closing his eyes Tian heard his last moments on this earth of a man shouting down his phone on what is presumed to be the ambulance.
Alas, it was too late for Tian has already closed his once and for all.
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an hour later in a seemingly endless void of white
'....'
'....'
'Am I not dead?'
'Where is this place?'
'Damn, is this hell just this white void!'
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Trillions of years later...
Tian: 'Aah I'm gonna go crazy if I don't get out, I've already been here for 12 hours!'
(souls have a different perception of time, so that's why Tian thought it has been 12 hours instead of trillions of years. But if you have a more powerful soul then you can sense the time flow better)
???: "Hello, young one!", a voice boomed, a voice so ancient you cannot help but bow down in its glory and greatness
Tian: 'What's that voice, where are you!'
???: "Calm down, young one I'll explain what is due !"
A refreshing wave washes over me like a cool and gentle caress of the wind.
Tian: 'Alright, where am I and who are you and where are you cause I can't see you?'
???: "Well, young one you are in the Primordial Void of Creation and as for who I am you can deem to be as in your human's word the God of All Creation the most powerful being ever seen in the entirety of the omniverse and as for the reason you can't see it is because you are in soul form right now, you only have consciousness not having any of the senses!" a powerful and prideful voice boomed
Tian: 'What! So you are a God of Creation huh that is pretty f****** awesome, although I don't know what the Primordial Void of Creation is it sounds powerful just like in those Wuxia and Xianxia novels!'
GOAC: *chuckle* "You sure are an excited soul for being here for trillions of years"
Tian: 'Yeah! It has..... did you say trillions of years!'
GOAC: "Yes I did indeed, I am very sorry that I neglected you over the trillions of years that I governed the universe!" a regretful tone sounded out
Tian: '.....'
GOAC: "Hey I am really sorry for forgetting about you okay. At least think of the benefits, for a mortal soul to stay here in the Primordial Void of Creation! Your soul has already been strengthened innumerable times! So much so that I can feel that even my soul is somewhat weaker compared to yours!" said the God of All Creation in an effort to try and cheer up the soul named Tian
Tian: *sigh* 'Well it's spilled milk so no use arguing about it' *sigh*
Tian: 'But I do expect some compensation, alright like wishes!'
GOAC: "Yes of course, with the strength of your soul you are able to take on many gifts, by the way, you also have 3 wishes"
Tian: 'Nice well can I wish for unlimited wishes!'
GOAC: "Well yes you can, but I'm going to have to set a limitation where you can wish for a single thing in a year and only when you turn 6, is that okay with you?"
Tian: 'Of course it is, I actually didn't think that I would be able to wish for unlimited wishes! My second wish is to have talent and potential surpassing you The God of All Creation'
GOAC: "Well now this is interesting, I guess I am going to see you someday, aren't I?"
Tian: 'Exactly I will become as strong or even stronger than you!'
GOAC: "I look forward to it! Now, what is your third wish?"
Tian: 'Right, my third wish is to have a system which contains everything in all of the omniverse!'
GOAC: "Hmm, this is slightly difficult, nevertheless... alright there done now if you are done I'm going to send you to a cultivation world."
Tian: 'Wait, can I pile up wishes with the limiter?'
GOAC: "No, otherwise when you are reborn as a baby you'd just be able to wish to become the strongest being in the universe, multiverse and finally the omniverse."
Tian: *nervous laughter* 'Yeah I guess so, hahaha'
GOAC: "Well then if nothing else I am going to send you on your way."
Tian: 'Yep there is nothing else I wish to ask of you so you can send me on over to the cultivation world so I can dominate it!' said Tian with confidence oozing from his voice
GOAC: *hearty laughter* "Yeah, I expect great things from you Tian Dapo!"
Tian: 'Of course, see ya then have fun, or whatever you do to pass your time!'
As soon as Tian finished speaking his soul started to fade away to be reborn in an infants body and one day dominating the entirety of the Omniverse.
Meanwhile, the God of All Creation has a faint smile on his face.
GOAC: "Since you had such a terrible experience of life in your previous world Tian, I'm going to let you become the only heir to the most powerful Clan in the strongest Universe."
GOAC: "I hope you will live a happy life Tian" said the God of All Creation as his body fades away into the Primal Void of Creation once more.
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Back to our MC
I tried opening my eyes but I couldn't. It felt like I was floating inside something warm, like a warm shine of the sun on my body.
Tian: 'Aaah, I get it I must be a fetus or an embryo' says Tian as an exclamation mark appears above his head.
*DING* 'SYSTEM HAS FOUND HOST'
*DING* 'BEGINNING THE INTEGRATION PROCESS'
1% 10% 30% 60% 90% 100%
*DING* 'INTEGRATION COMPLETED, WELCOME HOST TO THE ALL-POWERFUL OMNIVERSE SYSTEM'
Tian: 'F*** yeah, I finally got the system!'
Tian: 'Right, let's calm down and see what this system is all about!'
Tian: 'System show me your functions and explain them'
*DING* 'GLADLY HOST
SYSTEMS FUNCTIONS ARE AS FOLLOWS
INVENTORY: A INFINITE SPACE ALLOWING HOST TO PUT ANYTHING INSIDE BEING INANIMATE OR ANIMATE.
STORE: ALLOWS HOST TO BUY ANYTHING CONTAINED IN THE OMNIVERSE, LIKE BLOODLINES, WEAPONS, CULTIVATION MANUALS AND MANY MORE.
LOTTERY: THIS ALLOWS HOST TO SPIN THE WHEEL OF THE OMNIVERSE. THE LOTTERY INCLUDES WEAPONS, MARTIAL ARTS, CULTIVATION TECHNIQUES, AND MANY OTHERS. THERE ARE THREE DIFFERENT TICKETS TO THE LOTTERY THE SPECIAL TICKET, THE ULTIMATE TICKET, AND THE OMNIVERSE TICKET.
QUESTS: THIS GIVES QUESTS WHENEVER THE HOSTS WANTS. THE SYSTEM WON'T FORCE THE HOST TO TAKE QUESTS. THE QUESTS ARE PLACED INTO THREE SECTIONS, SIDE QUESTS, MAIN QUESTS, AND EMERGENCY QUESTS.
COMPANIONSHIP: ALLOWS HOST TO CONTRACT A HUMAN OR ANY TYPE OF BEAST INCLUDING QI BEASTS FROM THE LOWLY BLOOD FRENZY BEAR TO ONE OF THE MOST POWERFUL THE IMMORTAL CHAOS QILIN.'
Tian: '*whistle* That is a lot of functions! Alright, system explain what the Special, Ultimate and the Omniverse tickets do.'
*DING* 'GLADY HOST
THE SPECIAL TICKET ALLOWS HOST TO DRAW COMMON, UNCOMMON AND RARE LOOT.
THE ULTIMATE TICKET ALLOWS HOST TO DRAW EPIC, SPIRIT, AND MYSTICAL LOOT.
THE OMNIVERSE TICKET ALLOWS THE HOST TO DRAW LEGENDARY, UNIVERSAL, AND OMNIVERSE LOOT.'
Tian: 'Well, this seems cool but I don't know what the ranks for the loot are, so mind telling me system?'
*DING* 'OF COURSE HOST
COMMON: THE MOST EASILY FOUND LOOT. 50% CHANCE OF FINDING IN ONE'S LIFETIME.
UNCOMMON: MORE HARDER TO FIND OR MAKE THAN COMMON BUT STILL NOT THAT GOOD. 25% CHANCE OF FINDING IN ONE'S LIFETIME.
RARE: VERY DIFFICULT TO FIND OR MAKE AND IN THE MORTAL PLANE IT IS REGARDED AS A LEGENDARY ARTIFACT. 5% CHANCE OF FINDING IN ONE'S LIFETIME.
EPIC: ONE NEEDS TO BE VERY LUCKY TO FIND ONE. 1% CHANCE OF FINDING ONE'S LIFETIME.
SPIRIT: NEAR IMPOSSIBLE TO FIND IN A LOWER TIER UNIVERSE. 0.001% CHANCE OF FINDING IN ONE'S LIFETIME.
MYSTICAL: IMPOSSIBLE TO FIND IN A LOWER TIER UNIVERSE, VERY DIFFICULT TO FIND IN A HIGHER TIER UNIVERSE AS WELL. 0.00001% CHANCE OF FINDING IN ONE'S LIFETIME.
LEGENDARY: INCREDIBLY DIFFICULT TO FIND IN A HIGHER TIER UNIVERSE. 0.0000001% CHANCE OF FINDING IN ONE'S LIFETIME.
UNIVERSAL: IMPOSSIBLE TO FIND IN ANY UNIVERSE ONLY CAPABLE OF FINDING IN AN MULTIVERSE. 0.00000000001% CHANCE OF FINDING IN ONE'S LIFETIME.
OMNIVERSE: IMPOSSIBLE TO FIND IN ANY UNIVERSE OR MULTIVERSE ONLY CAPABLE OF FINDING IN THE OMNIVERSE. 0.0000000000000000001% CHANCE OF FINDING IN ONE'S LIFETIME.'
Tian: 'F****** Hell, everything onwards from rare is near impossible to find for a normal person but luckily I'm not gonna be a normal person *hehehehehe* imagine our MC rubbing his hands together as he says this.
Tian: '*cough* Anyway now that I know all of your functions system, I've been dying to know what my status is!'
Tian: '*clears throat* System show me my status!'
*DING* 'OF COURSE HOST'
NAME: UNKNOWN
RACE: PRIMORDIAL CHAOS GOD
HP: 100 / 100
ENERGY: 0 / 0
STR: 100.5
AGI: 5
END: 50 / 50
DEF: 300
INT: 10,000,000
WIS: 10,000,000
LUCK: 1,000,000,000
CULTIVATION REALM: NONE
CULTIVATION TECHNIQUES: NONE
CULTIVATION MANUAL: NONE
EQUIPMENT: NONE
INVENTORY: GOD'S LETTER X1
COMPANIONS: NONE
Tian: 'What the f*** my INT, WIS, and LUCK stats are all messed up, like holy shit! Well, I'm gonna need to know what my all of my stats do? Hey, system can give me an explanation on all of my stats.'
*DING* 'VERY WELL HOST
HP OR HIT POINT: HOW MANY TIMES YOU CAN SURVIVE BEING HIT BEFORE YOU DIE.
ENERGY: HOW MUCH ENERGY YOU HAVE. ENERGY CAN BE MANY THINGS LIKE QI, KI, CHAKRA, MANA, AND MANY MORE THINGS.
STR: HOW STRONG YOU ARE PHYSICALLY IN HOW HARD YOU PUNCH AND HOW MUCH YOU CAN LIFT AMONG OTHER THINGS.
AGI: HOW AGILE YOU ARE.
END: HOW LONG YOU CAN LAST IN DOING MENTAL OR PHYSICAL ACTIVITY.
DEF: HOW MUCH DAMAGE YOU CAN NEGATE.
INT: HOW QUICKLY YOU CAN THINK.
WIS: HOW FAST YOUR COMPREHENSION TOWARDS CULTIVATION IN GENERAL IS.
LUCK: HOW MANY ENCOUNTER THAT YOU CAN GET THAT WILL HELP YOU IN YOUR LIFE.'
Tian: 'Huh, just like a usual RPG stats are huh?'
Tian: 'And what is this about God's letter?'
Tian: 'Huh, what do I press to open God's letter...
*DING* 'DO YOU WISH TO OPEN GOD'S LETTER'
YES OR NO
I clicked YES and GOD'S LETTER opened up, and I could feel an ancient and calming aura coming out.
'This is a letter that will let you know the basic information about the place you're going to be born in. Tian the place where you will be born in is the most powerful clan in one of the higher tier universes. The clan's name is THE PRIMAL CHAOS CLAN, namely because every single clan member is born with the PRIMAL CHAOS bloodline be it a branch member or a main family member. The PRIMAL CHAOS bloodline is the strongest bloodline in all of the Omniverse. However, don't fret Tian your clan is exceptionally strong so there is no out there to challenge them. I also gave you a gift and made you the only son of the Clan Head so there'll be countless resources for the Clan to give you. Good luck Tian and I hope you will be able to get strong enough to visit me.'
Tian: 'Thank you God for your gifts' said Tian in a soft mumble inside his head while he felt warm because of the aid that God gave him.
Tian: 'Right, well now onto cliffhanger-kun'.
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