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Pregnant with the mafia boys baby
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The only gay boy in his school, finny finds interest in the bad boy. But little did he know the 'bad boy' was a young mafia leader.
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It's so good Story and i like it so much. I can draw and if you wanna, i can do it like book with pictures. I will post it here sometimes and I will write you there as the author of the story. [img=update]😍😍😍. I'd be so happy for the next part of the story😋😍🤩😘
I like it but the story goes by to fast and I have no knowledge of the characters. i do like that you switch povs but if you could add a litte more detail that would be nice😁
Hey, I'm just trying to get some quick exp sooooooooooo I have to write a review. I really didn't want to do all that so I just wrote a review for my own story.
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So far i liked the story but it help you made the story slow down. How about adding more dialogue. Maybe describe the second character more. and maybe use ( when i got to school) instead of " fast forward to school" all and all i think this story is not a bad start.