Give it a chance
Hey, I get the starting may be a little different and it's your usual overpowered and reincarnation tags, but give it 10 chapters before you judge it
It's not a beta MC letting everyone walk all over him, swimmers body and evee starter type novel if that's your type of novel
If you hate it after 10 chapters well…..fair enough I guess it's not your thing but no hard feelings everyone likes different things and this was just my story amongst the masses
Also from chap 72 onward is when the dialog is less clunky with Gideon "speaks" and flows better I'll re write it eventually but for now it is what it is
It's just gotten easier to flow conversations since I've been writing a few months now, I didn't have confidence to differentiate characters without named markers before but I'm pretty sure I can do it now..
État de l’alimentation hebdomadaire
-- Classement
Power Stone 
-- Power
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