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Pirates: I Rely Only on Myself

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Auteur: DaoistP85had

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Pirates: I Rely Only on Myself follows Noah, who finds himself transported to the world of pirates. Refusing to be shackled by the so-called chains of fate, Noah chooses to carve his own path. He won't rely on any "Nika Prophecy," nor lean on the legacy of a Navy grandpa, a revolutionary father, or the backing of a Yonko mentor. With unwavering determination, Noah proclaims: "This world is broken, and if no one else will step up to heal it, I will. I’ll tear through destiny itself with my own hands."
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jypim
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My review on the story until chapter 25. The writing quality: English isn't my native language, so I can't really be the judge on the writing quality, but from what I read until now, it's great with no obvious grammar errors. Story development: It's a fast based story with a lot of timeskips, but it's detailed enough so you don't miss anything that happened during said timeskips. Character design: Noah, the main character, is intelligent with a very calculating mind. He's ruthless to enemies and strict with his family (crew members), but until now, all the characters aren't fleshed out due to the small number of chapters released. Updating Stability: This is where this story really lacks. Two chapters, a week really won't cut it we need more, seriously in the webnovel space, a chapter each day is the norm or five chapters a week, most people would avoid reading your story or keeping with it due the low update schedule. World Background: It's the typical one piece world, but the author explores something unique that I didn't see in any other one piece fanfic until now, so the five stars for the creativity. Now for my opinion on things that raised some questions for me: 1- Why tf does the mc want to recruit Nami in the future when she wouldn't add anything to his crew other than deadweight now after Lilith got her DF. 2- I understand wanting to showcase the strength of the crew but making them face two crews that have people that can use Haki in the east blue is just a bad idea, I understand that they have reasons in plot for how they know Haki (one is from Wano, the other came from the Grand line), but I feel like that was just wayyyyyy too fast for progression. 3- The mc Noah mentioned how the world government could have just captured the week people close to the strawhats to lure them and capture them, can't this also happen to the mc now? he's basically surrounding himself with family members he cares about, and it's impossible for all of them to reach admiral level so they're still vulnerable to being a hostage. 4- This isn't really a question more of suggestion, I hope the mc doesn't start any romantic relationship, this will only create a week point for his enemies to use against him just like he said in point 3, and if the story will contain romance please let me know I really can't stand it in webnovels.

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DaoistP85had

Cognito Ergo sum, I think therefore I AM…. Anyway if you guys one piece with a better world-building and story. Then this novel is for you.

4mth
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Oleg_Nikitin

Это было интересно и динамично. Продолжайте дальше в том же духе. Спасибо! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4mth
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Evil_History

История, мягко говоря, странная. 1. Автор просто обожает вводить новых персонажей и почти не упоминать старых, из за чего у нас здесь чуть ли не оригинальная история, а не фанфик. 2. У гг так легко получается находить и доставать дьявольские фрукты, что становится непонятно, почему у каждого в этом мире нет одного или даже парочки. 3. Гг так рьяно начал исследовать морское дно, что за считанные дни заработал миллиарды! Миллиарды, Карл! Неужели жители морского, мать его, мира, никак не додумались до подобного? А может им помешали миллионы огромных монстров живущих под водой? Те же примитивные водные колоколы делали и в нашем мире сотни лет назад.

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TianZunZhe

Continue author, don't stop. I feel the potential of this novel[img=update][img=update][img=update] ................................. ................................ ................................

1mth
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Glebby_Boi

The novel is great. It is one of the rare cases when the main cast is mostly OC’s, but it’s done right as all of them have there own flare and uniqueness. The story itself is unique and the author doesn’t shy away from absolutely derailing from the plot. The novel itself is a mix of action and kingdom building, right now it has a feel of building up an empire before striking big. Would love to see more action though, as rn it’s heavy on the kingdom building phase. I am hoping for romantic-subplot for added flare, but as a whole this novel is great and unique! Keep up the good work author!

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Humbuub

They're getting everything for the cost of nothing, haki manuals, rokushi manuals, treasures and Devil Fruits. There's zero stakes at all, it's too vanilla.

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Gank_Man

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Rational_madness

Giving a 5 star before reading just because of the description. You have no idea how annoying the nika, prophecy and D d**k-riding is

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