Synopsis
|A guy named Robin karlsen liked to travel in the most impossible areas to reach on earth and make blogs of it. He was quite famous for it and he enjoyed it a lot and trained a lot which would help him in such situations.
A day he got information from one of his early subscriber who was a tech geek who liked to take pictures of places on through satellites sent him email of a place which had naturally become electromagnetic and it creates a beautiful awe inspiring scene.
The further he read it the more excited he became and went but alas he died being electrode on that place by seeing the most beautiful scene of his life|
Authors Note:
Hi author here i am new at writing and I got the idea of this from a Chinese novel. I liked the idea but not the novel cause obviously it was like every country is China and everybody speaks like it. so I thought why not make my own please feel free to give tips
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Please write more chapters soon. Only six chapters is not enough for this kind of story. At a minimum I’d say 400 chapters but hopefully one thousand chapters💜💜
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Ignore the 3.4 score is just me being honest because by no means this fanfic is bad. Writing quality: I give it a 3 because of this being write as a hobby and the author clearly being new to this doesn't check or edit and there some confusion of the usage of a and an which is fine one can easily understand. Secondly the usage of - name: " blah blah" doesn't fit well with the webnovel format but that's fine. Others minors details but meh. Story development: not much to say I quite like it but to little chaps to make a full opinion. Character design: I just love them and I am bias. Updating stability: as already mentioned the author writes this as a hobby and when he feels like it so don't put to much burden to the author, instead be grateful hehehe. World background: not much has been explore but it's marvel what do you expect there's a lot to explore.
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