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Party At Japan
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Synopsis
Hiromi Arakawa, Makoto Inoue, Shimomura, and Nomoto team up with a secretary, manga characters, and some soldiers who have no actual roles in the Fullmetal Alchemist franchise in order to stop an evil plot against the manga publishing company, Shonen Gangan.
-This is set RIGHT after the Fullmetal Alchemist light novel, "The Abducted Alchemist"(Don't need to read, but yeah...)
WARNING: This story...is absolute...well...it's kind of crappy. It's one of the first fanfiction I ever wrote, and is very underdeveloped. Mostly the purpose of the story is for humor and considering it is a parody, not much makes sense. I really, honest to god, would not be surprised if I got like thirty or more one-star reviews. Though, if some people actually enjoy this story, then you're welcome! I'm glad you like it! And...don't worry, none of my other stories are this bad. I can confirm that because this story was written about two years ago, and all my other stories are very recent-about two months ago. (I'm talking about the ones I post on Fanfiction.Net) Plus, the grammar...is...well, it's readable, so I think you'll be fine. But there are a few mistakes here and there...So, yeah. Just a warning.
[Note-I do not own any of the Fullmetal Alchemist characters mentioned in this story, except for a select few OC's. I do not know the real-life people that are mentioned in this book, so any mistakes made in personality, gender, and any jobs is purely accidental. Nor do I own any companies mentioned in this book either. This is non-profit and solely for entertainment.]
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In hindsight, it probably would have been a better idea to have put my review using the ACTUAL review feature instead of using my synopsis...but yeah... So, from the author herself, I'm just going to clarify that this is not my best work. It' mostly just for some childish comedy and slightly makes fun of all those "characters fall into real world" or "person falls into anime world" cliched stories. (If you actually read this story all the way through, you will probably notice the common cliche that I used here.) I think my rating might be me trying to cut myself some slack, but I did try my best at writing a parody on nothing but caffeine at three in the morning. So...here we go: Updates: I updated all this crap in one go, so I will give myself a FIVE. For any other story, I will give myself a three, maybe two, though for those stories, they at least have some quality content. Writing Quality: Eh...a THREE? Is that too much? I mean, the story isn't meant to be taken seriously anyway, so the quality is half-decent. Though, I will warn that the second half of the story might feel a bit rushed. Story Development: Like I said...the second half seems rushed, and it's only around this time when the plot develops thoroughly, so I gave this one a TWO. In the first chapter, I would say I did a better job, but after that, it...yeah, it's just rushed. Character design: ...I dunno, a TWO as well? I mean, I was actually pretty proud of how I made my original characters and characterized other characters, but one big problem(for newbie writers, please read this-don't make the same mistake I did!) is that all my characters had somewhat of the same voice. I think it was because I was trying to take my comedy a bit too far, which led to all the characters being out of character, and have similar personalities. I probably should have thought about that at the time, but again: please, new authors, don't do something stupid like writing a story on coffee. PLEASE. World background: Um...a THREE, I guess. It made it easier when using a real life place like Japan, and though it was fun to add new ideas into the setting, you might notice that one plot device is never explained. Maybe one day, I might add an Epilogue talking about those unexplained subplots, but I don't know. Though, if I do end up doing that, you might notice how different the quality will be... So...yeah. Shameless author review with cutting myself some surprising amount of slack. Though, if anyone would like to read this to give me some MORE advice, then go for it! Just don't waste your stones on this, I have a WAY BETTER story(*wink*shameless advertising*wink*) that needs some votes. ~Jewel