Synopsis
Elsa woke up early and found out that she thinks about her classmate too often.
She didn't want to believe that she had a crush on him as she was sure he wouldn't fall for her.
She keeps telling herself not to fall in love with him.
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Ray , soon found out that he had a crush on his friend's friend and didn't know when it all began.
He wanted to pursue her but didn't know whether she feels the same or not.
He wanted to know her feelings first, so that he can do something about his feeling's inside him.
This novel is about their up's and down's and how they get together.
It's a bumpy roller coaster ride .. hope you guys have your seatbelts on, as the male and female leads are surely strapped in.
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Hey everyone, I'm really excited and nervous for my novel.Please do guide me in this journey.
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Interesting and captivating storyline filled with fun-loving characters. 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
The first chapter does not cling, especially those with the genre of romance is not a favorite. As already noted earlier, one of the reviewers, the first chapter, should encourage, intrigue, interest the reader, go to the second chapter. Not from the sense of responsibility of the reviewer, but to satisfy one’s curiosity. As one friend of mine spoke of a literary critic, why describe the room so thoroughly, coffee, if you never come back to it? Moving over to the second chapter ... the introduction seems lengthy, but this is just my opinion not a professional. Nevertheless, it is easy to read, the meaning of the actions is clear, what and how the main character feels. The third chapter - there are too many heroes, secondary, it will be easy to keep track of them ... I am glad that the chapters are short, the text is clear and understandable. Simple sentences. This significantly increases the bonuses for reading, easy to read. The fourth chapter - Akira? Manipulator or just a rude and not educated person? Or maybe just a troll? Feeling ill at ease, she decided to humiliate the other in order to exalt herself?
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Hi oh my goodness I love your novel I can't stop reading and laughing at them and I can't wait for the updates to come I'm really looking forward to it and I will support you.
Who would've thought that DarkRay would get his own char. In a novel 😂 In all seriousness. This is a hidden gem. I'm not the type of person who reads romances, but this? I can't wait to find out more. It's so simple yet interesting. Author does a good job there. Quality is nice, development too, loads of feelings... Added to the library, thanks for sharing this!
I love this novel, the fl is kinda cute, Its funny when she burst into tears😂😂😂😂 I also love that it's based on a real life story, am gonna read this to the end. I will also recommend it to my fellow readers😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗 Writting quality is not bad, am a failure at grammar myself, but based on a reader perspective, I think your grammar is nice. Well done😗😗😗😗😗
Here I thought i was gonna see snow but all i saw was beautiful story. But my bad it's on hiatus right now. i will be waiting for you author.
This is such a happy story🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 The character development is good plus the college setting is realistic. The romance is fresh. We will patiently wait for the update but please do continue the story.
Nice storyline. It's based in the real world. Probably Indian. From all the Kurti and stuff. Looks good from how the author presents the story. Fluffy and funny in between. Nice going. keep up the good work. The viewers of this genre will love it. Keep going.
Grammar wise, its good. The story's pace is quite nice, it doesn't feel rushed nor slow. Just going with the flow. I haven't read much but I bet this will be a great story,. Keep up the good work Ms. Author. I also have a story I hope you can check it out ~ Thank you.
This story is interesting as it's not like the usual CEO stories. Though I'm not really fond of romantic stories but this one caught my attention. Grammar is good. Keep it up author! 😉
I love stories that show different character perspectives, so I really liked yours. As far as I read the story was top, well structured and with few mistakes, so I recommend it to everyone.
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As a engineering student I can understand the surrounding it was just like the flash back, and about the story I really liked it a lot, I am in love with Ray, it gives me goosebumps sometimes because story is so genuine and I can Imagine things happening in front of me. I will look forward to it. Keep up the good work author.
This novel reminded me of high school love. So pure and sweet. The rush of heartbeats are very exciting! I love how you describe each characters and also the situation in detail. It really helps to picture it better. Keep up the good work!
I won't point out anything since you have people to do this job for you, completely a smooth and simple story without any rush. No revenge, no drama. Goodluck on your journey along with the readers.
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When you thought you've read all kinds of interesting romance there and haven't read this then you're wrong. Just by merely reading this novel it will make you feel happy and you can't help yourself but smile. Technical-wise, plot is good it's not too complicated and make you really interested, pacing is really nice you can just get to flow easily. All in all, it's must read. Please author do gently tap your shoulder and say this, 'I'm doing well 😊'
Read till Chapter 30. -------- This is a hidden gem. Good story ❤️ got me hooked 😍want to know what's going to happen next 😘😘😘. The writer did a good job can’t wait for the next one 😍please update more😍 It's so simple and beautiful, kee** you engrossed. Author does a good job in character development. Loved the Quality of writing.. Very fluid! A beautiful read! Keep it up 👌
I read up until the first volume to see whether i’d like it or not. Besides the minor grammar mistakes (and a few punctuations), this book has been amazing! the book didn’t catch my interest at the first few chapters until I started to like it later on. The story’s pace wasn’t too fast nor too slow which seems to fit my taste. It’s cool to see that some parts were based on real life events. Is the FL’s college experience based on RL events as well? Kudos to the author and keep up the good work!
Woooooooooow!!! What an amazing and interesting story. I love the characters, I like the fact that the story is moving in a nice pace. In fact, you should update fast. I can't wait to enjoy more. Love it
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