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one time sign in system in Harry Potter
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, a boy died and met God who gave him to chances to choose from multiverse system and he ends up with one time sign in system let's see how he becomes a king from nothing
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, English ain't my language first time writing a novel don't mind it do give your feedback please thank you and enjoy and you can take the ideas from my novel and create your own
, and for description purposes Harry Potter series of novel doesn't belong to me but the original author only thing that belongs to me is the OC MC Si
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i like the sign in system novel concept but this one is too op. daily sign in,people sign in,location sign in, animal sign in, object sign in, all in one. and the rewards are completely over the top. i mean tonks sign in was metamorph skill+ black bloodline queen sign in was gold, diamonds and pendragon bloodline. wasn't it called the one-time-sign-in-system, ther is no "one time about this" or does it mean every object,person,location and animal only once? that is hardly a restriction considering the billions of sign ins he can still do grammar is not good, but its readable, just not a fun experience. the author uses no punctuation marks, which makes it very difficult to read especially the longer paragraphs
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L The story is good with the concept of the login system but they plactically give it away all the MC does nothing and let's not talk about grammar seriously take some time and fix that
too cringy and getting unreasonable abilities without any work even if it is the reason of the work like a transformation ability that is an occlusal ability weird just wait to get
writing quality 1 star yeah its hard to read this updating stability 5 star and for the other 3 all 1 star, we already know about the world background so no comment in there, but character design is really flawed he got a sign in system and according to author he can only sign in once a day? but looks like its not true while he sign in for that day and got 1 pound as the reward he also literally sign in while holding the hands of the queen, so the sign in once a day is useless since he can just sign in again everytime he wants to, this also happened again with tonks. so why put the rule of one sign in a day when clearly he can just sign in everytime he wants to
mm la idea es buena, pero la escritura esta un poco desordenada y algunas palabras no tenían sentido en traducción, por el resto creo que esta bien, primer reseña aquí esperemos que esta historia prospere
Overall Rating: Subpar/average. Could've been better and lots potential, however, due to numerous grammatical errors as well as lack of accurate English terminologies it greatly decrease the fanfic quality. Still, kudos to author-san for a well thought HP fanfic ideas even though it isn't completed nor updated.
Love the book,.................... ....... waiting for more chapters.................. . ..............................................
Writing quality is not that bad, i’ve seen worse. it’s the plot that gets me in Harry Potter there is such a crime as bloodline theft being realistic the mc could have gotten away with the first one but the second would have seen him executed before he could set foot in hogwarts.
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История прекрасна , но грамматика просто ужас , лишь из-за сюжета прочел все........................................................................................................................................................................................... . .
I tryed i really did, the content is ok but the grammer really detracts. His caracter seems to rush at everything he does and his over all personality is bland and unchanging. I recomend using the program grammerly to fix the grammer issues. The part that ruins it the most is the characters thought process jumps from place to place. The authoe explains the characters thought process a tad to much. I do however have to say if not for the above problems i would have continued the story. I wish you all the best and if you make another book i will atleast check it out because your ideas are on point you just have a problem getting everything out to wheRe everything flows smoothly.
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well fanfic is good I am waiting for him to have gate of babylon and then summon saber (artoria) just think what will her reaction be knowing a descendant of hers is related to Gilgamesh 😂😂😂😂
hey man please comeback and upload more chapters you know why reader love fanfiction not because of grammar or but because of the story the idea the thought of having super awesome cheat in our dream world so man please continue don't think about anyone whoever comment on your story and those who comment the writer quality of writing is not good enough so they have to understand this not the platform for being writer this webnovel's fanfiction section here writer wrote there story there dream reader love those dream while thinking of being free from all the restriction of society and world or even gods let MC have op sign-in let MC have and awesome and adventurous romantic life