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Synopsis
He is Yuji 15 years old otaku his favorite anime is naruto but if you ask him if he has a chance to be reincarnated where he wants to be reincarnated he will choose ...
IF YOU HATE THE SLAVE THING IN THIS STORY DON'T WORRY IT WILL VANISH LATER IN THE CHAPER.
Warning: all the characters and the story are not mine so credits to the owner. English is not my first language so expect my grammar to be wrong
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État de l’alimentation hebdomadaire
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meh it's just it has too many plot holes. jajwjsnendjenendjdndjdkdndnendjenjenejenejdhdhemaoakdbeodkwlansnskwsnjdenkssmenkdnekekenksmkeekndnd
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Es basura los niveles de poder están mal dice que tiene la fuerza de un almirante y todos le hacen daño una gramática terrible literalmente oda te mataría si ve como insultas su historia así
This is really good although the character design is alittle bad like killing kaido and linlin and what he did at the end is not really convinced the ff would have been better if u hadn't kill the original emperors but increased ther strength so the mc could fight them over and over again
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I really loved the story. The problem was spelling mistakes but for me not much. If you use audio reading / listening then you read nicely.
the story is developing a little too fast for my likings, and i like his power and all but yeah the story isn't really what i expected to turn out to be
Well this is my fanfiction so i just rate it with 5 star even though it's not. My grammar si bad.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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The MC wished to be able to brand people making them 100% loyal to him. Basically slavery, which is disgusting, there isnt even a villain MC tag......... ...................