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A young man without happiness receives the chance of a happy life in his favorite world
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Well a good idea at the beginning but the grammar is just horrible, so I can't continue this story. You should improve your grammar at least a little if you wish to continue.
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Just the writing quality is bad, if you Have time to edit You could maje this story really good. Thats all, the rest is fine cuz every novel starrs like that.
I am enjoying the story so far, it would be better if there were more details in the fight parts........................................................................
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Good story so far..........