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Omniversal Trade Center
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Synopsis
Death isn't the end of everything as Karna thought, as after his sudden death he gets offered a second chance at life. It chance doesn't come for free though, as now he has to manage a shop that connects to the vast Multiverse.
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it has a lot of potential. just dont turn it into a pokemon harem we r good' dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it
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.Its good and has a lot of potential. just dont turn it into a pokemon harem dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it
The quality of the writing is good but the fact that he writes without knowing the characters personality especially one piece infuriates me
Love this fic. The author is so intelligent , the writing is so brilliant. I am his biggest fan. lol