Novel Del

LV 4

Mel_Aniv

The narrative is good and very detailed. Even the pacing is fine and good. Not too fast nor too slow. The storyline is also one of its best features 👍 Great job on that 😊 I can't wait for your work to get featured, it deserved. Kudos of a job well done. Hope you find success.

LV 3

AlicoleChronicler

I liked the detailed descriptions of the surroundings and the characters' emotions. There is plenty of mystery in this novel. I look forward to finding out more about the characters' family relationships. There is plenty of background information and many secrets that we have yet to discover!

LV 3

Tanya_Winters

Very well written! The grammar is perfect. I am very meticulous with the grammar and this story doesn't have errors from what I've read so far. The descriptions are really detailed. I like how you describe the scenes. They very vivid and flow naturally. Very nice writing, author!

LV 1

DaoistNotAvilable

The story starts off with an explosion of action. It is well paced and kept me anticipating what would happen next. Overall, I liked reading it. Good work.

LV 13

lohse_

Although I have to admit that I don't know how this fits into the "fantasy" genre, the book has been great so far. The writing style is good, and I like the date and date stamps. It is very well thought out. The author is also humorous. Good book!

LV 12

ZeroX0666

A great read with interesting character and an even more interesting storyline. The author did a good job with this.

LV 1

Eva_Smith_0875

Wasn't surprised as this turned out to be one of the great books on this platform. Even so, this book remained vast and unique. The language is clear and relatable. This book will get the applause it deserves I am sure. Compared to other rebirth novels I've read this one stands out completely. Extremely high potential, I can see this on the top rankings in web novels in the near future. I hope to see you there too author!

LV 2

zigginah

The story is good. I love the originality. The plot is amazing and so are the characters. Will definitely add it to my library. Good work writer ,would love to see more of your work

LV 1

Love_zeesh

these kind of stories always hit the right chord of your heart. this author has got the potentials and i wish him all the luck for his future...

LV 1

Miss_Asriya

I am loving this! The plot is superb and the way the author write this is amazing. Not to mention the very detailed imagery that makes the readers fully immersed in the story and in the characters' perspective and emotion. Great Work author! This novel have more potential! Very recommendable. Keep it up.

LV 2

Serira_Valtore

That's so cool. It's very nice and I should mention the authors choice of names and flow of interactions. It's very easy to imagine and don't really need to put work to ur brain. It's a simple and well paced book. Simply loving it and hoping for next chapter release

LV 2

Aliabhatt11

Wonderful !!!!! I think the author tried his/her best to portray our life situations that we go through at some point. like our emotions, how we behave with others and how one could take advantage of us or how family is also toxic. Rooting for u author. Keep up the good work

LV 4

kerryn

The start is excellent, it pulled me in. The storyline is perfect, and the dialogues are great. Overall, the book is perfect. I am looking forward to more, Good work author!

LV 3

Biva

Interesting story and its opening scene. The struggle of ML against to rise with power is making curious to know more and more. The flow of story is good. Great work author.

LV 1

_eellaabbee

This is a fantastic novel; it began with an exciting scenario that drew me in as a reader, and the plot progression is unique. I am not very expert when it comes to English grammars but I can tell that the story was pretty well-narrated, like the way the settings was describe an how the author choose words to describe the action scene was superb. This is the kinds of story I would literally recommend to my friends. Nice work, author! <3

LV 3

Richie520

The story's pace is slow, but enjoyable. The starting chapters are especially good with all the descriptions and the emotions were conveyed nicely. Would surely recommend this.

LV 3

Sylvain8

A very good read. I recommend this book. It has a very unique story development, not a linear narrative, but it makes it more exciting to read. I liked the names given to the characters. Seem to be well thought out.

LV 1

Blue_hour553

Amazing story. Enjoyed it a lot. Though it started in an intense way, it mellowed down progressively. That doesn't mean it was boring. Hooking plot, with complex characters. Exactly what I was looking for.

cheers to an amazing piece of work, you write well I hope to see more from you. do your best to get better. Onward forever and backward never.