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Tribe Online, a VRMMORPG created by joint companies Sky Corporation, making it the only VRMMORPG in the world. Sky had a big ambition, they wanted to create a second world by creating Tribe Online. A world where people could build a new country, kingdom, or people could be an adventurer to explore the vast world within Tribe Online.
People were excited by the new release Tribe Online, not just the professional players but the game enthusiast too. They joined the game with ambition and passion.
Yang Shen too joined the game for his passion, to fulfill his mother's last wish. A desperate attempt as he could never fulfill his mother's last wish in the real world.
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Written after chapter 108 : I found something great in this story. Something I didn’t know I missed, something I wasn’t looking for, but something I needed : The MC plays a MMORPG, with a GROUP !!! (of soon-elite-to-be-players, of course but nonetheless) Yes, I know, incredible right ? but having so many stories in online-game-settings, ending with the OP-MC soloing everything by himself, becomes boring… And yet here you are, a story where the MC falls in a prison of sort, with fellow inmat…sorry, members following, having to build a team to get out of here, in a kind of good-feeling-village settings. And I have great hopes for what will follow. I hope that this village-feeling won’t disappear later on, and that the relationship within the group will be reinforced. And I also liked the MC calling his best friends to share his OP-discovery to play together. That’s how you are supposed to play such games… Oh, and we have real IRL city names for the IRL parts, which is way, way better than the usual « X city » and such. Notes : Writing Quality : 4,5/5 => here and there some missing words and some typos, the writing-style is good for me Stability of Updates : 3/5 => my fan-thinking is taking the better of me here and I NEED the rest of the story right now y’know ? hence the harsh note. But I understand that quality takes time, so… Story Development : 5/5 => so far so good, a good balance between IRL and in-game story Character Design : 5/5 => the MC story and personality is credible for now, the IRL shows some real nice things, I like it. The group is being built right now and I am eager to know who will be the next members :-) World Background : 5/5 => Real city names. Period.
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Read to chapter 32 and just couldn't do it anymore. The mc is getting nowhere. I understand there are troubles in his life but it feels like he doesn't have enough based off how you make the mc out to be. He is just too casual and laid back but has big dreams with too many set backs. By chapter 32 he should be somewhere especially with his fateful encounter. I feel you just made it too hard and too ridiculous for a beginning story.
i haven't read the book yet but ill give it 5 star hoping it will be good as armipotent also looking forward later ill change my review if good or not.
The story is written well everything is good however you should really change the name should be about a man trying to run at No Kingdom building it takes too long to get into I was really hoping for a king the building
I read to chapter 20 and couldn't continue. I am sorry but the story is boring. The writing quality is good however the story isn't engaging
Won’t lie, the start was a little rough to read (a little boring and slow), but after chapter 45 it really does start to pick up. If you can read through the first 45, you will start enjoying this read
Overall, I like the structure of this story and I think it has potential, but I am disappointed with the slower pace. Maybe the novel will pick up the pace once a "Tribe" is formed between the various characters. Author definitely seems like they have a direction and the main cast all have some personality instead of one dimensional characteristics. Good: -game seems interesting -blend of real world and video game which gives life to characters and makes the world seem more real -No line up of jade beauties trying to get into MC's pants just cause he has a pulse [as of latest chapter, 86] -MC is not a money obsessed like a lot of video game genre MCs on this site Bad: -I am current through chapter 86 and there has been no kingdom building, no romance, and no e-sports. The novel is interesting though it seems more like a cultivation novel where almost all of the focus is on the main character being a "trash" with a cute little sister type character doing a VERY long training montage with stat increases instead of changes in realms. -way too much early focus on press conferences and other news segments that have little story relevance [at least as of chapter 86] -characters responding to the smallest conflict between each other as "do they hate me?" if you have been friends and close for over a decade and the one little thing makes you think that they hate you, that is just rough. -There are some grammar errors though nothing that makes it impossible to understand what is going on in the story.
i would definitely recommend, but that is just because i really enjoy gaming novels, but the story is nice, mc doesn’t feel op or something and there is already some character development. if you’re not sure if you want to read it just read a couple of chapter and decide if it’s worth it after :)
So far it's a good read, at 54 chapters and its still interesting. Worth trying out................. .............. .......
I was kinda hoping this would get a remake on this story, your other 2 books are so good. good luck ........................................
What a rare find, a vrmmo novel that's actually good. Writing this review here in hopes to encourage author san. To those deliberating whether to read or not, defs read. it's one of the good ones!
I like the book there are a few holes in it but all in all it isn't bad. I hope that the author finds an editor soon. and will continue to upload chapters. Good job.
Isn’t it still ongoing or not continuing anymore?...........…........................................................................................................................................................................
My impression on this one is, it was really good and many good and detail description around the game. It also has a good gaming mechanism which almost follow the norm in real life. It very in opinion. Thanks author
So far from reading this book it is quite good a little on the slow side. However the main character has to grind his way out of his stocky situation.
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Dark of night and waxing moon come to us a single pool hear us sing our witches' song and send us moonlight clear and strong Earth and water, wind and fire one and all you must conspire to banish bad for goodness sake cos I need moonshine for my cake Weary travelers long ago shared their bread and made a vow that they will be forever friends and so shall be until time ends
seems like a good book so far enjoyable well written and stable updates for now with lots of potential have not seen any kingdom building elements yet for the tag to be there but their is a lot of potential for this novel also MC does not seem so OP right now hopefully it stays that way as i find very op characters a bit of a turn off. good book so far lots of potential looking forward to seeing how it develops.
I love your book Armipotent so I will give this book a 5 star. I hope it will have a steady update and I hope the best for you Author_san! . . . . .
Hello, a few words from the author This is a slow-paced story, please be patient with :) and this is a rework of my second novel Tribe Online. since this is a game novel, I will try to balance 40% time within the game, 40% time about his real life, and the remaining 20% is about competitive scene, e-sport, and others. I will try to balance it like this. Criticisms are welcomed, but sometimes (or maybe most of the time) people think that sh*t-talking is being "harsh" to critic the author while actually, it's not a criticism, you are being rude. I will delete such a review if there's one. thanks and hope you enjoy the story.