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Alex is a genius with an IQ of over 300. After his death, he was confronted by the spirit which oversees samsara.
where he was informed that god governing his world has to forcefully kill him since the serum he develop would have ended up in the organization hand .
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Not going to lie from what I see going on it has potential to be something great mc not power hunger like the rest from other novel just hope you update more often I enjoy the story so far
Muito interessante essa historia ta incrivel espero o próximo capítulo continua essa obra maravilhoso a historia ta incrivel 👍👏👏👍👏👏👍👏👍👏👏👍👏👍👏👍👍👍👏👍👍👏👍👍👍👍👏👍👏👍👍👏👍👏👍👍👏👍👍👍👏👍👏👍👏👍👏👍👏👍👏👍👍👏👍👏👍👏👍👏👍👏👍👏
Me gusta como esta formada la redacción, le veo potencial a la historia (a pesar de que es una mezcla de dc-marvel, no está mal pero en lo personal no es mi favorito) pero me choca mucho el tema de la violación, la indiferencia de Diana ( ¿como simplemente deja una carta? Uno pensaría que mínimo sacariá su espada como advertencia).Y ni hablar de la falta de culpa de Álex (justificándose que lo que aprendío de su abuelo y su "manera" de cortejar a una mujer). Sr./Sra. Autor por favor relea el capítulo y cuestiones. Por lo demas excelente fanfic.
Writing quality is good but it could be better. For example Use " " for conversation and ' ' for thought. Grammar could be better too. You need someone for proofread/editing(optional) Make word count around 2000 per chapter or release 3-4 chapter at once. Will waiting for more improvement & development.
Just got to say I love your novel hope the mc gets a harem with the best marvel and DC girls if a harem is given can you pls add Black Canary but to end off my review I'll just say keep doing you great novel in the making