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Auteur: MrDojo

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Synopsis

On the Continent of Skyhaven, there are only two paths in which a sorcerer could embark on, namely; The path of Light and The path of Darkness.


In a world filled with heroes and villains, the most nefarious practitioner of The path of Darkness was ambushed by more than a thousand sorcerers of the Path of Light.


after a thrilling battle that lasted for more than thirty days, the sorcerers of The path of Light triumphed in the end.

At the moment of his death, a blinding grey object exited his body, before disappearing into the void.

Ten thousand years later, a young boy from a war torn country is reincarnated into the body of a young sorcerer from the continent of Skyhaven.


At that same moment, he suddenly heard a strange sound, followed by the words.

<Ding>

Welcome Earthling!

Congratulations on inheriting the Necromancer System.


Do you wish to begin your journey?

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Thanks again for reading.

This is the unedited copy of the bestselling Book by Mrdojo. Support the Author by buy the edited and updated version from Amazon (once it is released).

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UndeadSage

IN A NUT: ******* fighter MC re;inced as an adopted freeloading 'trashy' young master with a necromancer SYSTEM!! REVIEW: although the system seems has an OP potential, the level up is rather slow! Although the story seems to share a similar fate.. it is undeniably INTERESTING! AUTHOR- SAN, IF there is a ROMANCE pls make it late until the MC is strong enough! THANKS FOR THE CHAPTERS AND KEEP'EM COMING!!

6yr
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MrDojo

Hi guys, Mrdojo here. Just wanted to thank you all for checking out my second novel (Hope you guys will take a look at my first work, 'The 7 Realms'). If you guys have any questions regarding the novel feel free to ask, I will try my best to provide satisfactory answers. This is my first attempt at a 'System' based novel, wish me luck guys. Thanks again for reading.

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DarkDaoist

This isn't for faint of heart or goody two shoes, the MC is a heinous evil person. MC is remorseless, heartless, merciless, cruel, cunning, manipulating, rapist, sodomite, torturer, necromaniac and other evil things. He's a kin-slayer who plotted to kill all of his family and allowed the death his own biological mother too who he hates despite her being innocent and cared very much for his well being. I cannot bring myself to even relate to the MC but scum like them exist so it's a good read to see a rise of an evil villain.

6yr
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Gemiae
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I love this novel and everything about it. For any fans of evil protagonists, calculating protagonists, blood and gore, and dark magic, this is the novel for you. This novel always keeps me wanting more and I believe the story progresses at a good pace, with several chapters being quite long so you feel like you’ve received a good fill of the story for the day. I love the characters involved and the plot that is included throughout each arc, and it always surpasses my expectations. It also has some funny moments that caught me by surprise and I enjoyed a good laugh, which helps you appreciate the story and the fun the author had in writing it. It’s by far one of the best novels I’ve ever read and the author really deserves to be applauded for his writing and dedication to the fan base.

6yr
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SpiritSovereign

I always like a dark and cruel MC and to be honest you probably cant get any more twisted especially after reading MC backstory so i would like to say great job author because its a great story and a side note for readers if you read this dont complain how its too brutal because the world isnt all rainbows

6yr
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Bringer_Of_Peace

I like the story so far, and I think that It have a great potential. I also like the many points of view that we have, we get to know the world around the main character a lot more. Looking forward to more chapters. Best wishes for more chapters and a great novel that we all can enjoy.

6yr
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Karyehs

I wish I could like this novel. Really! I like necromancers and I like systems... And I also like "true neutral" MCs, which some people may describe as "evil"... But I can't enjoy this novel. - The author keeps repeating his informations sooooo much... He is basically 'showing' the scene, and then he 'tells'/explains it to us again.... Sometimes this would be fine, but it happens waaaaaaaay too much. - Sometimes he is not only showing & telling us the scenes, but also let his characters react to the scene, without missing the opportunity to repeat it again. Sometimes less is more! - He is writing about the genital of a 13 year old boy in a 'mildly' sexual way. (I wonder for how many people this is a plus :/) - MC is ALWAYS "widely grinning" like a idiot.... Not in a social situation, but for random mildly positive things.... He is "widely grinning" at least 3 times per chapter... I didn't really care in the beginning, but it seems to be the only mimic/facial expression he is capable of without acting. - I don't like when the MC acts like a retard. Like his walking style, etc.. You could say he has a reason, but to be honest it is a retarded reason. - World background is at least in the beginning very weird and contradictory... A continent, which enjoyed thousands of years of peace, random villages get wiped out in rituals and nobody is really surprised. My opinion. I probably would have cared less, if I didn't hope for something good (necromancers <3). *Grins widely with a scary light in his eyes, which would everybody shiver who recognizes it, but nobody even notices.*

6yr
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Heavenfallhellrise

This seems like an awesome story can’t wait for more chapters. I just read it and I’m hooked definitely looking forward to more of the story

6yr
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Ahriman92

Glorious torture ****. I haven't read any LN this raw and gory before. It's incredibly refreshing to have an all out evil character without ANY moral qualms. There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes though.

6yr
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DGAFGOD

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6yr
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BloodMoonMonarch

At the end of First Book I decided to write this review knowing what I'm standing on. As name suggest it's a system novel but it's diffrent than most of them, it's "interaction" with host so far is at the level of those from LoHP. MC himself is progressing as story goes on. At the beginning he appears as slightly ruthless and cunning person, as story progresses he turns into cold-blooded, cruel and slightly insane protagonist (and rapist). Story itself is intresting, with good plot and world building, the only downside I can notice at this point is lack of side characters or ones that could pull MC into more action. Author's grammar is very good and only sometimes errors appear. Some moments may be disturbing for readers but they're not being overused. I'm giving 4.5 stars for lack of side characters whose names would be worth remembering (most of them die in 3 chapters) and occasional grammar errors. Other than that this story is a masterpiece and I'm waiting for book two. Good luck and keep up nice job Author.

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Reisgem
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The only thing that I ask myself reading this novel is why our mc despite being a mage only have one attack spell? Why no fire balls and variants,anyway I want say 2 things: just take my power stones and I would love see an anime made from this story(no filler and downgrade on ******** parts)

6yr
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Zvon
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This novel reminds me of dungeon keeper and its slogan its good to be bad. Its always interesting to see a well written mc vilain. Its even better when people he kills are usually in the gray category with the occasional goody. Highly recommended.

6yr
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bob20bob2

If you want a system novel with some real plot and characters then this is the one for you! This novel is a lot different than most of the *******ish novel I have read on this site because it has actual content where the author vividly describes the world and situation of the mc James and his system is amazing OP but not so OP where he literally becomes the Household lord in two chapters, so I recommend this novel for you fellow system and necromancy lovers( who doesn’t love seeing massive amounts of undead bow to the mc?)

6yr
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Naxrow

Awesome book but not recommended for faint hearted people , Awesome mc development ... Although one must read .. Generally when new chapters are uploaded ??

6yr
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COMPAL

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6yr
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unIReap
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This novel is not for the faint hearted people, Its not your heroic and fair Mc but the opposite is bloody, gory, twisted, dark. A new look at how our mc builds his strengt and the journey he takes. The story is very good written and the story is very stable format and the mc is not op at the start but use more his head which most other novels involving a system that mc relying on all the way. But not in this one so far. The mc he plans each step he takes. I would recommend u take a look and read a couple of chapters and see if u like this type of novel 5stars from me.

6yr
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Prashant_Limbu

Hyped for this novel.Though this is the first necromancer novel that I have read I am hooked. From MC 's. history to his desires it is quite easy to grasp his personality . For all thinking of reading of blood and gore with a little sexual appitiser this is it,also the world exploration is still yet to happen . Probably it will start from chapter 41 after the Dumian kingdom's DOWNFALL!!! CAN-T WAIT?!!?!

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6yr
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TranscendenceCat

Very good story... I like the MC too... Oh right, Author if you read this please put Level on MC's status whenever he shows it or when he is Leveled Up. I even forgot at which Lv he is now... Thank you!! And please keep continue to write the story...

6yr
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ScarletSteel

Overall good story about a necromancer, I'm always looking for a good necromancer novel, so I'm always happy to find a good one, and I found one here. Writing quality is pretty darn good, for a new writer. World building is coming along nicely. Characters are still growing so they don't seem to be 2d cut outs. A few written mistakes here and there, but nothing that will draw you out of the story and back to reality. The system is coming along nicely, the author has a lot of good ideas. The pace isn't too slow, and it is also not to fast. Guess author found that sweet spot.

6yr
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