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Minato and Kushina: “Happy Birthday! Make a wish!”
Naruto: “I wish for my mother to give me a sister.”
Kushina: “Huh???”
Minato: “Why not wish for a younger brother?”
Naruto: “Because as the elder brother, I want to be as gentle and powerful as Big Brother Itachi. But if it were a younger brother, he’d probably be as stupid as Sasuke.”
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What kind of changes will Alex, the traveller who became Naruto, bring to the Naruto world?
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* Slow burn & Wish fulfilment
Disclaimer: English is not my native language, I am trying to improve as I write.
* I don't own Naruto or any character other than the oc. This is purely a fanfiction
B/S: I am not the author of this fanfic; it is an Mtl, but I am making it readable, by adding my own content
Mlt link : https://www.mtlnovel.com/konoha-son-of-the-fourth-hokage/
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it's a nice story till now with Naruto getting the happiness he deserves & it's good to see Minato & Kushina alive
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Hey, everyone if you like the fanfic, please leave a review & I hope you enjoy this journey with me.
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The first chapter needs editing imo. It's confusing and I needed to reread it to figure out what was going on. After the first chapter, it's no longer an issue. Grammar needs work though. I just don't like how no one seemed to question how naruto used adamantium chains to help or how a baby is using chakra to begin with. The dialogue also seems awkward at certain parts as well. Otherwise, the fic has started off well. This is a review after reading 5 chapters, but the story isn't for me. Good luck with the fic!
Just by reading the sypnosis you will realize that the story is garbage, gentle Itachi? Good brother? Hahahahaha stupid and pathetic author.
Fanfic ini membawa warna baru ke dunia Naruto dengan pendekatan yang unik dan menyegarkan. Dari awal, mungkin terasa ada beberapa hal yang bisa diperbaiki, baik dari segi penulisan maupun alur, tetapi semakin jauh membaca, semakin terasa bagaimana penulis berkembang. Setiap chapter menunjukkan peningkatan yang nyata, baik dalam karakterisasi, narasi, maupun cara membangun emosi pembaca. Yang membuat cerita ini begitu menarik adalah kombinasi antara komedi dan drama keluarga, yang terasa begitu alami dalam kehidupan Naruto. Interaksi Naruto dengan karakter lain, entah itu sahabat, rival, atau bahkan keluarganya, dikemas dengan humor yang mengundang tawa tanpa terasa berlebihan. Ada banyak momen yang benar-benar menghangatkan hati, terutama ketika melihat bagaimana Naruto, dengan segala kepolosan dan ketulusannya, menghadapi dinamika keluarga yang terkadang konyol tetapi penuh makna. Walaupun bukan fanfic yang luar biasa dalam hal plot yang kompleks atau twist besar, cerita ini punya daya tariknya sendiri. Kehangatan hubungan antar karakter, pertumbuhan Naruto sebagai individu, serta keseimbangan antara canda dan drama menjadikannya bacaan yang sangat menghibur. Aku benar-benar menikmatinya dan selalu penasaran dengan chapter berikutnya!
This is a very nice fanfic. I hope there will be more chapters during the day. I can't wait. You are really successful with this fanfic.(Perfecto)
Don't read his shit it's Disgusting 🤢🤢 stupid bad worse and unreadable. This fuker went ahead and revealed things about his reincarnation, story had nonsensical theories and stupid plot. The character of Naruto has been destroyed completely by this sinner.
It's a fun fic, it's a bit like the "what if" idea of the Naruto filler where his parents manage to survive, in itself it is refreshing to see an AU world where Konoha does not seem to be rotten and Naruto and company have a more pleasant life.
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It's one of the few stories that develops an MC with charisma and a true hero's heart without having to resort to the cliché of a cold MC who treats everyone like pieces and every character besides him isn't developed, and turns all the other characters into pieces of shit to show that the MC is the "badass".
Al chile namas porque me gusto los capitulos del inicio le doy esta calificacion, puede que me arrepenta pero ya que le hago, aqui tiene sus cinco estrellas
more forced Hinata and Naruto relationship. Don't waste your time. When will these dumb fanfic writers learn to stop forcing relartionships, Hinata and Naruto only ended up together cause the "fans" wanted it, despite the relationship itself lacking and making no real sense that kishi even had to retcon flashblacks and do a movie to convince people to believe it 🤦♂️