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Naruto : The Flow Artist { On Hiatus }
4.31 (43 audimat)
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This shi is getting a rewrite for obvious reasons.
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The first 10 chapters are not the best not gonna lie, BUT after the fight with Sakumo the quality increases immensely... The power up although slow are logical and show the struggle the mc goes through to keep himself in check and increase his power... Lastly, the power levels seem to be higher to handle the power Garou has in later stages and although he meets way stronger opponents early, that show that the world itself keeps going and doesn't stagnate when the mc is not there just for the sake of the plot...
A very good Naruto Fanfic, although, as the author said the early chapter can be a little bit off-putting. The good thing is everything starts to get better after the Sakumo fight (which is something everyone in the comments section already said a million times already lol). Another good thing is the Female Lead selection. (no spoilers of course!!!) You also don't need to see a typical japanese beta personality who drag down romance for like 100+ chapters, MC is a pretty straightforward type of guy so that also can be considered as a plus. Overall, the fic looks great with interesting prospects to come by in the future.
No ooc, sometimes funny, no "every hole is a gole" stuff either almost stable update and the story is going good so far overall, good stuff[img=recommend]
I could make it 23 chapters in before I tapped out, I have seen this fic a lot and sometimes I’m interested enough to see what is written and it says I can continue for chapter two, but idr so I reread it, get to the place where the mc says the gamer word and back out, this time I tried to move past it cause who knows? Maybe the author will get better like some reviews hinted at, but it doesn’t, the sense of space is terrible, people will walk up to people’s faces, monologue, then walk up to that same person’s face, people will be hidden in a graveyard watching the mc, mc will be four years old, go to tsunade’s 2nd birthday party, at the end of the chapter there is a foot note that that chapter is a flashback but not specify time, and at chapter 19 it is revealed mc and tsunade are the same age, there are weird mental gymnastics involved so that the mc does not want to train in the martial arts that makes garou garou, I predict the list goes on but I cba
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Don't make a AU and we are cool 🤘 And 2 S-Class hatake, man hatake clan will become next big bad here.............................................................................................................................
The writing clearly needs more work, the structure is incoherent and the POV change in almost every page made the story flow choppy. I can't really take the story and seriously so I'm gonna read it as a parody, that make the story more tolerable in my mind. The updates are fast so that's a plus. World Background is AU, it's still at the start so I'll rate it 4 stars at the moment.
honestly speaking at the first 6 chapters the story is like meh. but at the later chapters the author out did himself and became alot better . so 4 stars for you [img=More pls][img=More pls]
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when author said that later it gets better. He was lying. It actually started good but it got worse and worse the more i read. Bye
You know it’s gonna be a great book ever known to literature when author says “ English is not my first language “
The story does not get good, it just doesn't, do not believe the author's comments if he ever says it does. It stops being the single most garbage thing I've ever had the disgrace of reading for sure, but that doesn't mean it is anywhere close to good.
First few chapter almost caused me to drop tbh but decided to power through and I gotta say I’m glad I did the story got so much better especially with that personality change he had, also love his interactions with Duy. Just wish the upload speed was better.
hi author i see that your ff despite being better than most out there and i mean really really good alright it's not getting that many stones but hey even trash ones get so many but i want to say that u need not care about them it's the few readers who love ur work that u need to care about and I really love it you've got potential just keep writing ,i wanna read it to completion so plzz don't drop it orEmma gonna go 💔
i didnt like the initial chapters as it was hard to read due to slight punctuation mistakes but the story is one to die for. i like it very much and by the means of this 5 star review i want to convey my feelings to the author that is he darento drop this fic midway, a beast god darou would be. the least of his worries.
This book is well written, and a nice read I was a little annoyed with the all caps sentences, but that is a matter of personal preferences when it comes to writing. It does not diminish the pace of the book nor the story written, it also represents the character well
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like it so far. grammer legit went from an elementary kid to a high school student rn so very proud of author for that. storys nice and entertaining. just hope he has a time skip soon as many naruto fanfics get stuck doing way to much when the mc is a kid and never advances usually past 13.
im not to great at giving reviews but ill give it a shot. in the first few chapters wasnt really catching my interest too much but that fight between the mc and sakumo is what really hooked me into the story. the attempts at humor those first couple chapters was a little rough but then got a lot better after and i was genuinely laughing out loud at some of the jokes. my only complaint is i feel hes getting stronger to slowly but the author did explain his reasons which i feel are completely reasonable but still i feel that tiny bit of disappointment at his growth but im sure that will start ramping up when that 2nd war starts. i hope that this merchant arc doesn't drag on to long while i think traveling around the 5 villages is neat im a little worried it will just turn into a whole lot of nothing really happening but i guess we will see and i will just have faith in the author it turns out cool. oh totally forgot to mention i really enjoyed his interactions with the other characters so far like dai and his nara buddy and hope to see them show up more often lol