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Naruto: Odd-Eyes (Old)

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Auteur: Htk_Kksh

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Synopsis

A nobel prize winner in the field of both robotics and genetics was killed by numerous government officials all over the world who all worked in tandem to eliminate the protagonist that they all considered as a societal threat.

Read as he reincarnates into the Naruto Universe as a character who was supposed to be a villain.

Author's note: Yes, there is the YAOI tag, because our protagonist will be attracted to basically anyone in his newly-settled universe, no matter the gender. That is why if you are triggered by this element, you can leave the novel page.

DISCLAIMER: MOST OF THE ELEMENTS OF THIS STORY ARE NOT MINE AND THAT INCLUDES THE SUPERPOWER SYSTEM, SOME OF THE CHARACTERS, SOME OF THE EVENTS.

BUT I WILL GLADLY SAY THAT MOST EVENTS, DEVIATIONS AND CHANGES FROM THE ANIME AND THE NEW CHARACTERS THAT I WILL INTRODUCE ARE ALL RIGHTFULLY MINE.

AND THE COVER PIC IS NOT MINE, IF YOU WANT ME TO TAKE IT DOWN, I WILL RIGHTFULLY DO SO. ENJOY!

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  1. Vezton
    Vezton Contribué 6
  2. Htk_Kksh
    Htk_Kksh Contribué 5
  3. VenerableDemon
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Htk_Kksh

Author review here!!!! For this volume, i would rate myself 4.6 stars. For the writing quality, i would say that i am well and improving as per the many revisions that occurred, so 5 stars for me. As for the stability of updates, i do updates of 1-2 chapters per week so 4 stars for me. Story development is quite slow paced, but now too slow paced where i tackle basically everything to the grains of sands that our mc walks on, sometimes i do want to speed up the pace because it kills me to write so much per chapter, so 4 stars. Character design is a 5 for me, because i did not really take on the canon personality of the main character because that would be unrealistic, they are two different people. For the side characters, i rated myself high because i showed character dynamics such as some people not aligning themselves too much to the main character, not everybody likes someone. And lastly world background, i rate myself 5 because so far i have presented the sceneries quite eloquently and i would say that everyone who will read my novel from the start could map out every events that have already or will take place. So Kudos to myself..... I will write a review per volume so please continue to show reactions and support so that im sure i am not writing badly.

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