/ Anime & Comics / NARUTO: I AM DANZO??
3.64 (19 audimat)
Synopsis
The negotiation between Konoha and Cloud Shinobi broke down because of the appearance of the golden horn and the silver horn brothers. Second Raikage died, and Second Hokage was seriously injured and his subordinates fled.
After transmigrating as Shimura Danzō, he already knew the story, and he also knew that he was the future leader of Konoha.
On the battlefield, Senju Tobirama looked at his students and asked: Who are you to stay to stop the golden horn and silver horn brothers, and buy us time to escape.
[God level selection has been activated]
[Choice 1: Hesitate for a second, give the future position of Hokage to Sarutobi Hiruzen, follow the development of the plot;
Task reward: Wind Style proficient at full level]
[Choice 2: Fight for the position of Hokage and cut off the road of Sarutobi Hiruzen;
Task reward: obtain the unactivated sage body of the Uzumaki clan]
Shimura Danzō took the lead and stood up and shouted.
“ Sensei ! You go! I'll Stay Behind !”
Hokage! I will never let you be Hiruzen!
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[A\N:- Love Interset only two members ]
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Thiss is MTL ,Not Mine I liked it so I'm uploading it here
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Écrire un avisthe grammar.... god... its obviously a Google translation of a chinese novel.... i mean seriously, the wording is like a brick thrown into a window to represent the mona lisa... just... seriously...
So far, I like the different characters mention in the story as it gives a more realistic feeling from the characters. I also like how Danzo and Sarutobi's path is swapped. I am though saddened by the lack of proof reading. Each chapter is butchered and sentences don't really flow well. It looks like the story was copy and translated from another story. I suggest you to review the chapters (old and new). Other than that keep up the work and you'll do fine!
This is worst then the actual machine translated version How do u get it like this??!!?😆 *for ppl that want a better version I saw it either in MTLNation or MTLNovel
I already gave up after reading the synopsis If you can't even translate the synopsis correctly I think that says it all ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Translation is a head ache but stroy is above average. Personal Score - 65/100 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Maravilhosamente maravilhoso, eu estava lendo essa historia no wattpad, mas n tava atualizando e fiquei muito surpreso e feliz quando achei essa historia com mais capítulos aqui e espero que continue pq eu gosto muito
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I can't even understand what is written in those chapter. I suggest (which will most likely be ignored) that Author do better job at translation and edit earlier chapter.
The development of the story is very promising, I think you can make something extremely special from this background. Though, the writing is poor but it’s somehow I managed to receive the idea you want to display. Overall good FF . I enjoyed reading it. I’m looking forward for more chapters. Nicely done ✅
Auteur Uzumaki_Kushina_21
This story needs to be more unique and stop using cliché to full plot holes and missing backstory. I was too harsh in my previous review that I have now deleted because of the characters name, Dark Demon. I still think that this name ruins the immersion of the story. Like who wants to read about a character with such a ridiculous name? Try to find some to proof read and brainstorm with.